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Old 07-01-02, 10:54 PM   #1
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Lately

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Lately
theres been one thing on my mind
one thing on my mind and its one of a kind
the aching thorns in my eyes have left me blind
but i still can think and share whats mine
theres nothing i can do if u leave whats mine astray
cuz in this life theres no time for delays
i can feel my hearts movement
and its coming your way searching for improvement
i feel the breeze of your soul dogding
i may have missed but i land on hands that r prepared for massaging
which i need indeed
off of love my heart feeds
and continues to grow like a seed
but i will not stop and plead
cuz everyone has a choice
you can go ahead and walk away from that calling voice
but soon you'll regret
that you tryed to forget
its blood that i sweat
from these gouging wounds that you u left
which have now become memories
i can careless of what you think of me
cuz you've made me stronger
theres no place in my heart for u any longer
so now im the one turning my back
i wont turn back around not even to see how u react
cuz i dont care
you've lost me and your not even aware
im floating
the hands have released and stoped the choking
to set me free
far away is where i want to be
cuz its my life
and lately thats what i've been thinking about day and night...
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Old 07-02-02, 07:04 AM   #2
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rhyming was kinda simple but the emotion was good and it flowed well
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Old 07-02-02, 11:49 AM   #3
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aweosme peice..... simple yet complex at the same time... the flow was awesome and the vocab was good, and emotions were deep and tru.... fave lines:

but soon you'll regret
that you tryed to forget
its blood that i sweat
from these gouging wounds that you u left

keep it flowiN!

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Old 07-02-02, 03:48 PM   #4
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yo iight drop! kinda complex but good thought. really nice flow

keepit up
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Old 07-02-02, 07:55 PM   #5
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