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10-21-04, 07:43 PM
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Feed Me
IP: 0825 899A
Im just so damn hungry right now so I wrote this... its on the biggie "nobody" beat don't expect my usual skill on this I'm hungry as fuck lol hook: somebodyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese feed me.....feeed me.... I'm sooooooooooooooooo hungry but nobody......feeds me.....feeds me... hook Verse:1 please ma...put down the key's before you leave, I can't breathe... these...KFC commercial's a tease I'm having dreams,and translating food into every thing I see and read... so please,before I choke because my teeth bleed, it just...everybody but us...don't grieve maybe..its because there parent's at least own beef...there life is better I been waiting forever inschool forever.. I couldn't get lunch because my account refused to settle...my indevor is my stomach rips and tighens when I stand up...teachers and deans tellin me to man up...I aint playin dumb..I attempted but my stomach wouldn't listen...it was a flood so my wait for a meal extended...my hunger's like a prison...the daily meal missed today's attendance this is my life yaw...I hope i caught some attention.. hook: somebodyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese feed me.....feeed me.... I'm sooooooooooooooooo hungry but nobody......feeds me.....feeds me... hook Verse:2 the fridge gather's spider webs...and collects dust damn its like a fight for little deb...we in debt bru... I know my mother...hsa food at her job... inside he car she hides subway mcdonalds on the sly... and she hides and its hard to find... where the fuck do she dine!!!!!!!!!! I'm her son... I can't even have one?...not even lunch she has brung...my head weight a ton...not even tums can heal the headach that aches me...I'ma pass out soon I hope no one awakes me...think of my safety... if I aint concious the paint aint harnest...so I will sleep through it...old dorito bags yea that's right I peeked through it...my stomaches so empty now you could see through it.... hook: somebodyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese feed me.....feeed me.... I'm sooooooooooooooooo hungry but nobody......feeds me.....feeds me... hook just an ending ooooooo please roman noodles I will kill myself if I would lose you you help me with the famin I been through thank god that god sent you thank you roman noodles....I love you peace damn i'm hungry as fuck
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10-22-04, 05:54 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: C286 773C
verse wuz tight
da hook wuz dumb pretty decent doh 6/10 |
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10-22-04, 05:22 PM
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
thanks
I wrote this hungry but my Verse's always good lol I went to my irl house and ate lol more crits niggas
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