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The New Beginning

..Im against the nation...sue me newbies....sayin ya iller than me?...then bitch ya fakin, just remember the shit im sayin...|...So legit when sprayin, i got "bronze lead" 5 duece to ya noose to clip a statement....even ya wits is hatin....I see a bunch of "Fake Champs"?...so ima ("cram their belts through their waists")...and have em 'Screw it to their back' like 'hip replacements'....

..Hold up...veins popped...the slain drop..|mad again|...hold ya tracks trains stop!...i got deviously insane drops....|...|rewind|..(veins popped)...shakin ya earth...like tremors...watch this next bitch wiggle.....Anyone wanna talk shit to Frein?...well im tha type to 'push ya funny bone up ya ass' just for 'shits n giggles'....

..Im legit and legal...im legit, and i stay sick...masochist of this text rap shit...so im quick to take and inflict the pain quick....so euphoric...make ya head trip and say shit.....and S.W.A.T. still talkin shit?...son im bout to ('stick ya stomach in ya throat')...and have your 'choking on your insides' like 'exphyxiation'...

..Even my computer port is bleeding...from reading you weakening verses, ya net thug lingo's bland....the fun is gone, ran off.....cuz now i got my 'lines crosstitchin ya palms' ta 'mend yo hands'......pop, stop, yall hop on jin and stand....Call me new bitches...but the fact is i'll 'pop out ya fuckin numbers' quicker than a 'bingo stand'...

..But now that im back..i decided i would drop a free flow, that would be 'lifting more hearts' than 'get well cards'...|...|Its Set|...my hell is hard....writing is my alterior motive to this net gangster bullshit, im planning to hit herbs, standing to spit words handing these scriptures...you bitchers....Yall aint even seein me? test Frein?...how? when im known to 'take ya whole crew out in ONE SHOT' like a 'family picture'...!!


NEW LEGEND IS BORN BITCHESS!!!!

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uppin this..................................

10/10, there's not really much i can say about this, it's that raw, i liked the meta4's at the end of each verse, fav meta was the hip replacement, if u wanna collab anytime then hit me up, good shit, drop feedback on "Lucky Misfortune" Myth/Fluidmoon

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17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S

thanks for the feed^^ ......uppin 4 more

jea fam respect...i seen this shit...this is Dope...nice vocab and wordplay....good visionairy..got me like..dayyum......

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damn man..this is surely 10/10..haha, u sure u a newb? cuz u sound more like a vet.. welcome to da fam!!!! yo..check out my open mic in my sig. n battle also if u could!! much respect..

-Mind

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dont sleep on this piece.....its gonna be open mic of october,........

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fire mane fire diz wuz hot u deserve proppz fa showley!

come on more feed then this.....

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dunt sleep on this ..........its straight fire.............uppin

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You can't beat me tell you mom to eat me
thats me bro that you're hearing on the c.d.
i'm two steps ahead thats why you cant see me
And I spread like water thats why you wanna be me
defeat me; NO define a true purpose
cuz in this rap game you move ahead like a tortoise
I know you wanna hurt this; put down your props
the proposition is i'll hit you in the chops
if you cross my path you'll be dealing with the master
fly like this don't miss you silly bastard
you may be quick but i am much faster
you the one that sux dick to pay your landlord
& your town has you labeled as a man whore
enuff debate, can't wait to hear your answer
you're known by your peeps to practice santeria
on the mic i'll chew you up & spit you out like diahrria


JK, don't take that serious I thought your song was cool & i'm just trying to show what I can do since i am also new here> I've got no advice for you just keep workin on it I think you're probably better then me but I want to hear you audio so I can further evaluate.. i'll give it 4 stars **** as good as i've givin anybody so far. If I you was 5 star youd have no business on this site thats when you can start selling records. Good luck man this is a good way to get noticed or form a band and improve on your emcee-ing

thanks ^uppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!1!