Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriding

lets do this bitch

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-13-04 at 05:13 PM

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Reloaded has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 05:15 PM.

checking in..................

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streetryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 05:19 PM.

this bitch thinks he top notch, and stocks glocks but yet he asks for some recognition...*
yet hes missin, evision this kid winnin thats like a dictionary not having definitions...
preminitions that he'd get merked by his own crew, you shoulda shut up and listened...*
reload this page cuz i infected his head, spread curses, verses left your neck fissioned...
this kid asks to be taken lightly sayin that bitches dont need to hate his rhymes...
spines fractured, captured and left to die but clockwork cant turn back the time...*
herbs presence is pure contridiction like slim fast bought in the stores bulk...
while my wits are known to kill ya kids like cigar's second hand smoke...
put your broad on "lay away" and keep your open call-outz closed captioned...
my style is takin razor blades across bobo to keep them cutting-edge fashioned...

*has a thread in emcee introductions for ppl to welcome him
*mc_bad_boy told him that he'd merk'd bad
*hs rapper's name is clockwork

uppin man drop ur verse so ppl can start voting on this....peace~1

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ok here we go........

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yo this bitch named his self streetryda/
knowing his gay ass only a dick rider/
lil nigga you just dont know/
the words under your avatar are right"What Flow"?/
my rhymes are outrages they will add another color to your rainbow/
you and gay people stick together like velcrow/
you acting and you aint even part of the cast/
while rhyming my lines will change your personalities like the mask/
nigga know he dont be riding the streets/
only time he get some is when he be beating meats/
its obvious that you get more dick than me/
cause your gay and im "straight" in tha pussy

Voted For: streetryda

From beginning to end StreetRyda had it.. I didn't see any punchlines from reloaded, Come on dawg... You ryhmes rider with ryder, now I don't know what to say about that... But like I said SR from beginning to end, ELEVATE RELOADED

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Voted For: streetryda

streetryda
structure is ok.. ur lines are a little stretched though.. flow fell off a little due to the stretchnes.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was alright.. some of ur punches connected.. attempted personals..

Reloaded
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. its newbish.. structure is ok.. ur line lengths were inconsistent though.. flow fell off a little due to the inconsistency.. no multis.. wack wordplay.. attempted punches, but none of them came out.. no good personals..

Overall
both had a decent structure.. both flows fell off.. streetryda had more multis.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. streetryda gets my vote..

VOTE - STREETRYDA

Please return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig.. Thank You.

aight uppin on these votes......lets get some more comin peeps
peace~1

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uppin man lets get some more votes come......stop sleepin on this

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up up up up whee these votes @ ppl come on daym

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upping for some votes......

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