aight i dont have a name for this yet.....i wanna no if any one wants to collab with this....

if not then this is the completed version......its my intro to my cd (if no one wants to collab)

its called
INTRO

http://www.soundclick.com/djemsce

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initial impressions...beat is nice


u entered the beat off beat...ur flow is all over the place...I think ur voice is fine...ur rushing some lines...I like some of ur lyrics tho


and u need way more mic presence in terms of delivery, not sound...Get that cocky air...u sound tentative



not bad for what it was...keep droppin n elevatin

^^i hope your talking about my intro and not my incomplete collabo....

but yeah....upping this shit

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man ur mixing is PURE trash hit me up on AIM and i'll give u some tips
lyrics seem iight but quality and music is so poor it dont make me wanna listen
but it can be imroved, u aint been doin audio very long so futures lookin bright
voice is pretty tigth

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^^^yeah i dont take much time to mix in and shit like that......basically just spit to a beat and combine them together....lol

thanks for the feed

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listenin...
beat is nice (heard it before)
flow is aight as well as delivery
go to Kingz for the Mixing Tips..
keep droppin tho ..peace..1

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