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09-24-04, 02:37 PM | #1 | |||
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fight for our rights
IP: BEF8 AF4D
where tha real soulja's at, lemme see ya raise yo gats
cock em back, bus’ a cap and watch MC’s brains go splat bust sum for dem fallen soulja's of the projects release yo anger at those that won't show respect most of our brotha'z got shot down by the cops we should fuckin shoot y'all , we are the special hood ops instead of spittin tight rhymes , we be spittin our rights in tha name of the fallen soulja's let us all fight keep doin yo shit till dem fuckers starts to bleed show dem who we are , soulja's of the lost streetz poppin dem police fuckers down with yo nine this means war muthafuckers , u have just crossed tha line we aint goin , we bout to flow our way into tha fight y'all don't mean shit to us , our ppl bout to take ova tha might
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09-24-04, 03:00 PM | #2 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
it was alright needs work tho man 6/10 not bad for a newbie lol word on wordplay, vocab, and expression check my open mic peer presure the links in my sig
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09-24-04, 05:25 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: D26C 0847
i dont know...might be good in audio...1
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09-25-04, 12:54 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: BEF8 AF4D
uppin
drop sum feedback
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09-25-04, 05:31 PM | #5 | |||
banned:to good 4 all da other rappers UNBEATABLE *lyrical madnes*
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IP: E923 2DB7
7/10 i say nice verse mayne u in da crew or wot
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09-26-04, 12:23 AM | #6 | |||
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IP: BEF8 AF4D
uppin ..............
need feedback
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10-16-04, 04:46 PM | #7 | |||||
Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
aight man u can be in dopeness defined if you want start repping the sig......unless you are part of another group i appoligize for the wait mc rabbit isnt part of it nemore so yeh peace~1
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11-06-04, 11:51 AM | #8 | |||
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IP: BEF8 AF4D
uppin y'all
drop sum feedback ty for the feedback to those who posted in here
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11-06-04, 01:02 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: 49D1 AEA3
Yea not bad......need better wordplay.....and try not to right everything from a first person perspective.....show different views and angles and use some metaphorical lines....Dont just use one view in a song....mix it up sounds better
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