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11-05-04, 03:18 PM | #1 | |||||||
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And So It Continues..Biblical Cypher II
IP: 33AE 4F40
Cant you see the actual meaning of beings?/
He didnt create us to make others produce shreaks and screams/ Who you think Jacob wrestled with when he dreamed?/ There's more to the concious then what seems- Mankind must do more than slaughter each other for their own beliefs/ I've traveled the land where the Dead Sea streams/ Been hung high-up in a Bell Tower's beams/ I've fought off the evil with the Hebrew regimes/ Dodged the most extreme of the Egyptian schemes/ I'm mentioned in the scripts, so take a second look/ Yall just follow the flow like fish till you get hooked/ scatter the range of the afghan plains/ You cant escape, wont hear of your name till they find the remains/ The all-mighty beast who still reigns supreme/ Spectators stare in awe the gleamin light beams from my wings/ Yah, its true this story has never been told- But the matter is the truth should be held, not sold/ Grasp the leather pages of the book till ya hands grow cold/ Till the white light glows, and you can see your corps from ya soul/ Don't be misguided by those with false idols- They got no lyrical content but posess flow/ My word has yet to bestow on those who believe/ Go against the sand-grains of time and ya life will be brief/ What more is Earth then harboring pagans and lies/ Cowards divise crafty plans to hide- While those who stand true grow wise, and recognize their disguise/ Dont be fooled, just look to the skies- As the clouds grow grey then so do our eyes/ Those who do not have the infinite truth are sent to their demise.. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Feedback, PLEASE...
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..-Da R.I.P.-.. "..I'ma R.I.P.pa', remember.." --Darkness Shines Bright-- |-([..Let The Records Show..])-| Body Count: 91 Kills Survivors: 16 Injured Still Lost In Battle: 70 Knock Outs In My Scope: -- |
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11-05-04, 04:29 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 33AE 4F40
damn, quit sleepin' yall...
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..-Da R.I.P.-.. "..I'ma R.I.P.pa', remember.." --Darkness Shines Bright-- |-([..Let The Records Show..])-| Body Count: 91 Kills Survivors: 16 Injured Still Lost In Battle: 70 Knock Outs In My Scope: -- |
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11-05-04, 04:32 PM | #3 | |||||||
***cITYSLICka***
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IP: 6CEA 0327
yes.........yes.........this is fire.good vocab,good structure,good content,damn 9.5/10.
keep droppin bombs.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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11-05-04, 05:17 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 33AE 4F40
Thanks, dawg..I try to do my best in every verse...cypher or written.
Can I get some more feedback? I wanna improve my game..
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..-Da R.I.P.-.. "..I'ma R.I.P.pa', remember.." --Darkness Shines Bright-- |-([..Let The Records Show..])-| Body Count: 91 Kills Survivors: 16 Injured Still Lost In Battle: 70 Knock Outs In My Scope: -- |
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