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Old 11-05-04, 03:18 PM   #1
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And So It Continues..Biblical Cypher II

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Cant you see the actual meaning of beings?/
He didnt create us to make others produce shreaks and screams/
Who you think Jacob wrestled with when he dreamed?/
There's more to the concious then what seems-
Mankind must do more than slaughter each other for their own beliefs/
I've traveled the land where the Dead Sea streams/
Been hung high-up in a Bell Tower's beams/
I've fought off the evil with the Hebrew regimes/
Dodged the most extreme of the Egyptian schemes/
I'm mentioned in the scripts, so take a second look/
Yall just follow the flow like fish till you get hooked/
scatter the range of the afghan plains/
You cant escape, wont hear of your name till they find the remains/
The all-mighty beast who still reigns supreme/
Spectators stare in awe the gleamin light beams from my wings/
Yah, its true this story has never been told-
But the matter is the truth should be held, not sold/
Grasp the leather pages of the book till ya hands grow cold/
Till the white light glows, and you can see your corps from ya soul/
Don't be misguided by those with false idols-
They got no lyrical content but posess flow/
My word has yet to bestow on those who believe/
Go against the sand-grains of time and ya life will be brief/
What more is Earth then harboring pagans and lies/
Cowards divise crafty plans to hide-
While those who stand true grow wise, and recognize their disguise/
Dont be fooled, just look to the skies-
As the clouds grow grey then so do our eyes/
Those who do not have the infinite truth are sent to their demise..
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Old 11-05-04, 04:29 PM   #2
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damn, quit sleepin' yall...
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Body Count: 91 Kills
Survivors: 16 Injured
Still Lost In Battle: 70 Knock Outs
In My Scope: --

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Old 11-05-04, 04:32 PM   #3
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yes.........yes.........this is fire.good vocab,good structure,good content,damn 9.5/10.
keep droppin bombs.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 11-05-04, 05:17 PM   #4
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Thanks, dawg..I try to do my best in every verse...cypher or written.
Can I get some more feedback? I wanna improve my game..
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Still Lost In Battle: 70 Knock Outs
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