here's a lil ditty we just put together. not done yet, only 2 verses in it, still lookin for one more. still a lil more editing to do and mastering. but hit it up n hit this up with some feed back

tounge tied

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ill hop on this.....

-Listening

Quality is decent...1st guy has a decent flow and a good vocabulary...but his voice is a bit annoying...all hoarse sounding...not feelin too much...emotion and delivery is good.....overall the only thing I didn't like was the voice...Hook is nice honestly....2nd verse is good vocabulary and unounciation wise...but flow is kind of annoying in some ways....overall good shit so far...not bad at all....

Rating:
7.5/10

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new method, send me your page to peep if you wanna get on tha track. thanks for the feed joker,yea, the first guy actualy has throat cancer, this is the first track he's got on in awhile since he got throat cancer, so im glad that he hopped on it, i think its ill that he got on a track even with throat cancer and ripped it. all in all im tryin to improve, so i wanna know how to make my flow better, so what parts are annoying to you? i could go back in and fix em. thanx

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wow, dope song y'all, this was good, the beat was dope,i was feelin the hooks too, first guy did very well on flow,,but the vocals were a little low, second cat had good flow as well, overall, pretty good track..1

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fuck this is dope!!! thats the kinda song i like...fuck...keep going

yea, I liked this. first guy was nice, second guy was aiight. keep droppin' though. not bad. pc

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oh, peep my song, it's called "Nw SPuL shit". weerd

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