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Old 11-14-04, 05:07 AM   #1
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2nd try at this Poem shit

Funny how it alwayz seems good in the Beginin
Funny how Love can Develop from a Friendship
If Givin your Heart is a Crime Then i Commited it
Gave you all of me from Thoughts 2 Penmanship
I put you Upon a Petistile,Gave u the Best of Me
Remorse? Grammy and even my Daddy Left Me
This Love Developed Unbelievably me into a Man
Undeniable Feelings for You are Here in FirstHand
But you Alloud another Man too come in Between
If Love is Blind,..Then your Beauty i Never Seen
Please allow me to Hold my Ownself Responsible
But i Promise you My Memories are Unstoppable
Ive had 2 deal with all of the Future Reputations
Chest Out Chin up i Embraced all of Tribulations
What is this Realy Worth? Such a Devine Force
Allow me 2 Dismember from you Now b4 Divorce
I have no choice but 2 Blame myself am i Stupid?
Reply come back Negative.I blame this 1 on Cupid
.....Damn...
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Old 11-14-04, 05:10 AM   #2
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weerd am feelin this dope for a secong shot at it keep droppin.....an cough check me AN nos's topical battle takin back my crown cough...that is all...
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Old 11-14-04, 01:31 PM   #3
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damn,i enjoyed reading this, it was very descriptive and emotional man, nice vocabulary and flow to this also, if this is true and whats going on in your life, be strong, and dont let anyone hurt your feelings, especially a dumb chick......lol....keep droppin man...1
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Old 11-14-04, 01:49 PM   #4
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4sho thanks 4 the luv
uppin
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Old 11-14-04, 03:47 PM   #5
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I Actually Thought This Was Dope...Good On Everything Wordplay, and Emotion, In Fact It's Relevant To What I'm Feelin Now..(My Story is in the Lounge)
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Old 11-14-04, 04:15 PM   #6
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Yea but im feelin better now
fuck dat bitch

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Old 11-15-04, 12:55 AM   #7
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uppin this shit
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Old 11-16-04, 02:21 AM   #8
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^yea, fuck that bitch, but uhmm fa real u need to do poetry fa real, u got a good way with wordz fa real....
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Old 11-16-04, 02:24 AM   #9
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uppin ima take poet of the month sometime soon damnit
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Old 11-18-04, 05:32 PM   #10
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upppin............
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Old 11-19-04, 04:28 AM   #11
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Damn!That shit was dope!Yeah, as someone else said, you need to do more poetry stuff, you have good wordplayin skills.
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Old 11-20-04, 11:38 AM   #12
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ya mayn...good drop...good 2 get that shit off ure chest tho right...been there...not only did this flow, but yo u used nice vocab, and aaaaything...good look fam...9/10...~1~
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Old 11-20-04, 02:10 PM   #13
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yea im done wit tha shit now tho
dont even think about it
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Old 11-20-04, 10:15 PM   #14
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yo cuz this sick nigga..matter of fact..I'ma nominate yo ass..
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Old 11-20-04, 10:33 PM   #15
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nice shit *Troop*

keep doin ya thing..9.4/10
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