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Old 11-12-04, 11:29 AM   #1
Ice Pick
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Uckfa Ouya

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......aiiyo....... Translation Fuck You

I'm on the mic nonchalanty
and still cause a ruckas
they rap like a wanna be me
and I still can't be fucked with
tediously stuck with
cats who wanna spar w/ My intellect
but simple minds is hard to reach
even with slugs and teks
whos mug is next........
on a long list of imposters
hear a verse, rearrange a verse
act like its yours when its not yours
fuck it, call me Oscar......
cause I'm grouchy throwin' an uppercut
and a battle ain't shit without me
and with me, cats is gettin' straight fucked up
your lucks up........
I see criticism in the form of jealousy
I don't give a fuck relish me
through negative thoughts and grammar
but hold your gunz high and back your words
with a rhyme caliber thats got half my stamina
one bar will bandage ya
round ya cap and leave you faceless
three bars put you outta commission
disfigurements in four or more places
a replacement would be a waste of flesh
and either my tounge is numb
or your flava is tastless (I think the ladder)
keep your mouth shut and don't say shit
cause your best off quiet
I conjure rhyme riots upon the mindless bias
so drop the sling shots you'll need to claps shots
between the eyelids of this rap Goliath.......

..........think about gettin' brave........don't try it....
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Old 11-12-04, 12:17 PM   #2
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good drop.good vocab,structure threw me off some but good drop.
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Old 11-12-04, 12:52 PM   #3
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that was tight mayne...structure threw me off though...good vocab,and good wordplay and multi's...didnt flow as good as i expected...keep it up mayne, i seen u do better, but this is still hot...8.5or9/10........1
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Old 11-12-04, 01:35 PM   #4
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that shit was tite. i like the way u use your words. im learnin new shit evey day. that was hot!!!!!!!!
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