Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Drop as soon as you can

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-28-04 at 03:07 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

enygma has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-04 02:40 PM.

Sorry.....it was supposed to be 10 lines

I'm bringing 10, so just match it

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This kid ain't elevated.....matter of fact this kid's shorter
Just take a loook at his verse....all he's bringing is dis for ya?
This fag tries hard to be sick....yeah, he's tried a lot of shit
Like when he took his HIV test.....he was thinking positive
Before you even check in.....kid, you aught retire
Cause when it comes to matching wits....you literally brought some fire
Don't even need to look at your verse....I know it's kinda boring
So just take this battle....and turn it into a suppository
Now back to school for you ....take it as a lesson learned
I won't even piss on you.....I guess I'll just let ya burn

dysphoria has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-04 02:52 PM.

you want some of this ? you sure ? come on kid you must be joking
like michael jackson, little boys assholes you be poking
quit strokin, your ego, cause sorry man but you aint all that
easy as 1 - 2 - 3 i pin your shoulders to the mat
and that's that, it's over cause your rhymes aint worth a lick
you better step back, but first remove your lips from my DICK!
you make me sick, why don't you accept you been defeated ?
take the thought of beating me out of your mind and delete it
dose me with aids ?? yeah i know you got that venereal
you better wake up, smell the coffee, or have a bowl of cereal
stop dreaming, cause your life is about to turn into a nightmare
you still on the net !! get on the mic, oh yeah that's right you scared !
going nowhere ? i'm making moves, man you better grow up
i got you scared you about to cry cause i see your lower lip quivering
you're pathetic, rhymes synthetic, with no ideas original
you steal and recycle so much, just reading your rhymes is criminal
that's it you're done and finished, and i left your spirit broken
i aint even gone write more, because the winner have spoken

Voted For: enygma

well enygma you ame extremely wack one of the worstr verses i have seen from you EVER!! but the good thing was that dys came even wacker... dys u had some decent punches but it seemed rather stupid to me... your verse wasnt consistent in the least bit... you brought amateur punches and a played style... enygma same with you... your verse was mediocre especially from someone who is ranked in the top 10 of this site maybe the top 3 i think you underestimated your opponent and dropped kinda wack so uhhh even tho you both were wack i have to give this one to the person who was least wack... lol

v/eny

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Sorry......I took a whole nine minutes while changing a baby's diaper and making lunch.....I really didn't feel like trying in this one cause there was no need

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Voted For: enygma

dysphoria:
you want some of this ? you sure ? come on kid you must be joking
like michael jackson, little boys assholes you be poking
quit strokin, your ego, cause sorry man but you aint all that
easy as 1 - 2 - 3 i pin your shoulders to the mat
^that was a bad way to start off your verse.. in a few places your verse stopped rhymin' (towards the end) the closer was so-so.. coulda been way betta, u need to elevate fa real




enygma
This kid ain't elevated.....matter of fact this kid's shorter
Just take a loook at his verse....all he's bringing is dis for ya?
^ i liked the sarcasm in the first bar.. pretty funny.. the lin about HIV test/ thinkin' positive was very creative.. you didn't have to come hard in this battle and it seems u knew that.. closer was str8.. pretty one-sided..

my vote is enygma cuz he had sum nice punches, enough to take out dysphoria easily.. -_- .. dysphoria u need to try harder and elevate your verses-punches/personals, fa real..

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Voted For: enygma

lmao.....enygma short but hard hittin opener n ya verse didnt fall off at all...liked the wordplay n wittyness...better then ya last drop i read...pretty good verse overall....much more elevated verse you dropped here compared to your opponent..
other verse...you had 1 line that caught my eye but it was played a bit, the rest of ya verse was filler after filler n had no nice content...good line(jus reading ya rhymes is criminal)
other then that bar it was well....hmm...wack....

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

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