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| ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::.. |
  
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10-27-04, 08:25 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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..kontroverzey.. vs ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
IP: C135 36D5
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30 lines max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 is kO Crew Votes Are Very Much Allowed And Must Explain Your Vote Good Or Will Be DQ'd Topic: Life Of A psychic Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-30-04 at 08:25 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Win by KO |
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10-27-04, 08:26 PM
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IP: C135 36D5
..::iNgEnIuS mInD::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 08:26 PM.
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10-27-04, 09:11 PM
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IP: F127 D910
..kontroverzey.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-04 09:11 PM.
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10-28-04, 06:18 AM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: F127 D910
...Psychotic Visions elapse my mind, as i go inside the mind of a college graduate... ...Her future is horrible, Murdered, raped, body left on the corner of Main and Hajuit... ...Chills crawl rapidly through my spine, what to come is now left in my Hands... ...I decided not to tell the beautiful women 'cause i do not wish to disturb god's plan... ...Crystal ball on my lap, i outbursted, "leave and never come back!!".... ...outraged she stormed out and questioned, "what was that?".... ...Both our minds were filled with curiousity and tension, but for different reasons... ....Muscles Tensing' I hope shes strong enough to make it through spring season... ...Psychic calls kept on hold as i wonder if the choice i made was correct... ...Realizing Maybe me tellin' her was god's plan, this thing put her whole life affect...(ed) ...I grabbed my jacket, threw on my packet and raced out the door... ...Hopin' i find this later, for she does not know what her life has in store... ...Questioning' bystanders if they have seen her each time the same answer... ...each time i heard the word NO! i picked up pace-n-ran faster-n-faster... ...reached for a quarter called the police, Come to Main st. quick i ordered... ...they replied? what's the problem but i hung up, what if she crossed the boarder... ...Right before my eyes i saw a high-heel, one identical to hers... ...I picked it up, I could feel violence in her presents, needed to calm my nerves.. ...I raced to the direction of the battle, It was in a dark Facility... ...Knowing in order to save this girl's life i would have to succeed my abilities... ...i see the women's clothes on the floor I circle backwards... ...thought to myself what am i getting into, i saw visions of him attack-her... ...I sense blood dripping i run towards it and i see Her There.... ...eyes wide open, Stripped naked, ripped out pieces of her hair... ...I knew that would be useful evidence, 10 mins later, the cops... ...Ran towards them, Freeze! They Shouted, Confused i kept runnin... ...six white cops, one dead white person and a black psychic? they began gunnin... ...I dropped to my knee's Realizing this is what got has had planned... ...Rising to the sky as an angel, not lookin back, i took the angels hand... |
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10-28-04, 09:28 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 4E6E 88CB
[My Gift] Im aware that my horrible nightmares are futuristic and present visions... All Full of horrific & far distant collisions of realistic murder victims... This power gives me the decision to choose who dies or walks w/ the livin... But I still wish I was never givin this gift that holds me in this hell prison... No Chance to escape & seeing the place of others fate really isn't so great... Since my fate is to replace the future & race time before deaths due date... This power of strong ability, had to come with the power of responcibilty... But I know the power in of me, is the reason im livin my life so miserably... [The Vision] As soon as I closed my eyes, i had a vision of some dramatic event... A person shot from behind, but no reason why this happend to them?? Shooter's face disguised, A gun in his right hand, left one held a knife... Happen during the middle of the night, the person shot had no more life... The victim was slolwy dragged leaving behind a long track of warm blood.. Threw him to the side of the street, where he was covered with wet mud... The killer went back in his car, and just drove off slowly into the cold mist... Then I finally wake up and for some reason I could still feel the cold drift... [Man In Black] Right wen i woke up i turned on the t.v. to see wut is tonights weather.. It said it was gonna rain hard all night, and that it wouldn't at all get better... I started to worry, was this vision going to come all true all jst in one tonight... I tryied to see who this would happen too before there was no day light.. I decided to take a walk outside, and saw a man in black behind me.... When i decided to walk faster, he did the same, now this is frighting... [My Last Vision] I ran for a couple minutes, thinking yes i finally lost that maniac... But right wen i reached this corner, I saw him agen rite at my back... I kept running, i noticed it was dark, and noticed i was lost... I heard a lighting, but it wasn't the thunder, it was a gun shot.. My back was full of blood, i loose my strength and i fell down.... The man in black walks towards me, n checks if neones around... As he drags me towards the mud, i see that my blood left a trail... I look at my hands and noticed that my hands were turning pail... As he left me on the mud, i heard a car drive away as i listend... and realized the person was me that was dead in my last vision..... dis this shyt in 45 minutes  |
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10-28-04, 10:26 PM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
Kontro man you got a lot better in topicals since you was killah bwoy lol.. this piece was dope and had alot of the characteristics of a good topical verse... the imagery was by far the better of the two verses... the structure and flow were off though it didnt really seem to be worded right in a couple of lines but then again its hard to word everything right in a topical.... I.M ... your verse was also pretty dope... i liked the sequence of events you used sort of like a time line in a bstract way... the imagery was good but didnt touch kontro's although you put alot of effort into your multies i must say that some of them were not needed and sort of clogged your verse at certain points. but you pulled through and let the whole verse flow and that gave you this win. you got more descriptive and forced your words less and made your verse better and better as time went on. dope battle
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10-29-04, 03:44 AM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: F127 D910
uppppppin......................................... ....
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10-29-04, 09:02 AM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 1619 BEDE
uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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10-29-04, 09:11 AM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: F127 D910
UPN this bitch..........................................
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10-29-04, 05:32 PM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: F127 D910
uupppinnnnn....................................... ....
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10-30-04, 09:53 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 0F52 0DFA
some one freaken vote damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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10-31-04, 10:46 AM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 90B4 EB32
uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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11-01-04, 04:21 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 1619 BEDE
uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin
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11-01-04, 07:13 PM
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«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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IP: 4B36 6908
Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
aiight, y'all both my nigkas and shit. But I was checkin' down battles and this one came up. But damn, I gotta say, props to both. Hot battle I-mind, nice shit. I liked the flow here shit was ill. You had some nice imagery and shit., I was really feelin' this verse. MAde me really think. Nice shit in there, creative. I liked it props. 9.5/10 Kontro, damn, man. Never saw yo topicals before. And this is hot first impression. I mean, I was like damn. You are ill in these too. Damn, fo reel. Nice imagery too. I was feelin' this shit. Wow, got me thinking too. I thought yo flow was good too, jus maybe in one line went off. Props. I give it 9.4/10 Overall, mad close, but the flow and imager of I-mind was better. I mind is imo one of best in RV in topicals, so Kontro you did pretty well. Tight shit props. and holla at this battle both. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157965
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11-01-04, 07:32 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 1619 BEDE
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lol, the first 2 paragraphs I took my time to write..n the last 2 paragraphs I keyed in because i had to time to write my verse...pretty good for it being keyed huh!! Now killah, imagine me taking my time to write the last ones lol
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