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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
07-05-02, 03:25 PM
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structure and wordplay was kinda off, not really a flow with it. but its imagery was on tap. aight peice, think ya could of done better. i aint saying there was nothing bad with this peice but ya could of elevated it. stay up though. peace.
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