yo when i spit yall fall. when i ball yall hata's craw. but when i flow u no its the mst neccesary to bob ya head. listen to my brand new thread. its hard . its straight from the hood ya no its good. so when u tolkin and chokin play it. dont even delay it.

yo drop ta ya knees, get hi get blode evrey bodie now i can make ya flow. come to me and you'll see it's me the lil wyte boi who is bumpin hella hard.... gotta bounce be bak in a min peace

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fix your structure.use the return key at the end of each line.
get more tech with your rhyme's. rhyming hood with good is played.
No hate just giving some advice.
keep dropping and elevating.
return the feed
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161070

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