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Old 07-06-02, 12:54 AM   #1
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Freestyle (short)

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stop, state ya name/
try to tell me u winnen but u aint even in the game/
fuck that rookie shit/
i ryme to hurt, my ryme is called spit/
fuck u if u think u better, fuck u if u think u tha shit/
i'm tellin u right now that none of ya'll can really spit/
u put big rymen words together and call it a rap/
keep rymen the way u do u'll get fucked in a snap/
let me break it down since ya'll niggez dont know about spitten/
it's just flowen wit ya mind and nothen is written/
ya just rap wat u think and not try to domnate/
but u fuckaz are so week i'll leave u wit no fate/
but before u exit the ryme u leave in style/
after u battle me u wont be round here for a while/
peace
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Old 07-06-02, 01:13 AM   #2
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...Simplistic Rhyming try to elevate your voacbulry...are we battling or what man?
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Old 07-06-02, 05:33 AM   #3
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This is VERY basic, u can certainly do with increasing your mental capacity of vocabulary...it makes for interesting lyrics, when it is combined with dignified descriptions & smooth flow...

Keep posting..

Peace n god bless
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