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Old 10-27-04, 11:18 PM   #1
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Exclamation Freestyle @ U Fagz Datz Scared 2 Battle

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Findin sum1 2 Battle me's takin too much time
Everybody must just be scared dat ill bust a betta rhyme...

..I've bin on this site all damn nite
Still found no1 who wants a lyrical fight
Wen i wanna battle an i send sum1 a invite
Maybe i should ask dem more polite...
then maybe they mite feel less confrunted n answer wid 'alright'
Wen i spit ma spittinz too tight
Now i got everybody scared of ma lyrical mite

Although dem bein scared seemz all gud..it really aint a gud thing
Cos nobody will battle me, der scared coz i lyrically sting
PPL on this site already realise, amma lyrical king..

Yo if this flo has cum 2 ur attention
An u think u can beat me, dont be scared mention
Im not a teacher u wont end up on detention
Bitch, I'm just lyrical perfection..

Sum people even use me as ther lyrical guide
Now Wid da net people will be doin it worldwide

U see, most people look up to me
Round wer I live, amma welknown MC
Infact sumday, u'll own ma CD

Anywayz im off 2 hit tha sack
Sum of you best message back
Then when i wake up i can launch a lyrical attack
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Jus a short freestyle @ dem fagz scared 2 battle...
n maybe from this flo sum1 will actually wanna battle me now...
anywayz yea, dont need feedback on diss, i aint gonna change it, or spit it agen, i jus need sum1 2 battle...
...safe...
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Sum PPL say tha MCin Aint For Da White Race...
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N Yeah Them PPL need a can of mase anna few hundred bullets released in a spray all ova der face /Just 2 Stick dem in der place /But really they aint racist,they just hatin on me coz dey cant match ma pace..
Seriously, if u really dont think MCin is for tha white ppl I aint gonna change ure oppinnionz so ay, I got one thing 2 say, An thats that ure umm GAY!
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Old 10-27-04, 11:36 PM   #2
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your a newb saying your a king but its a different kinda drop give it 5/10
no one likes self glorifacation exceprt for the person that drops it
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Old 10-30-04, 11:18 AM   #3
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Bitch... I Aint No Newb... Battlin in real life all tha fucken time..
Self Glorification???? Am Tellin it how it iz... uno... u battle me....
or u scared like tha rest ?!
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Sum PPL say tha MCin Aint For Da White Race...
...Why This Sayin This When They Kno Its A Disgrase..
N Yeah Them PPL need a can of mase anna few hundred bullets released in a spray all ova der face /Just 2 Stick dem in der place /But really they aint racist,they just hatin on me coz dey cant match ma pace..
Seriously, if u really dont think MCin is for tha white ppl I aint gonna change ure oppinnionz so ay, I got one thing 2 say, An thats that ure umm GAY!
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Old 10-30-04, 11:50 AM   #4
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ur a funny dude.real life doesn't matter in here.nobody cares about ur real life battles,style,or anything else.ur typing on a fukin computer sonny boy,whole different ball game.ya piece was aight,it shows atleast one person in dis mufuka thinks ur the nicest.........that would be you.word of advice,simmer down and relax.don' be so sure of urself,while were all lookin' at ur work laughin' cause....well read da shit u typed ull see.
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Old 10-30-04, 12:51 PM   #5
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That was decent but freestyling and writing lyrics are two totally different things; i'm still struggling to write some decent shit so my bro can drop his mix tape. My only advice- don't write down the first thing that comes to your head because chances are it's been said already. Overall that was an aiight drop kept things simple easy to understand. 7/10
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Old 10-31-04, 12:03 AM   #6
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Emcee Shutdown-Flywhiteguy

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I know you think you as hot as da south
but ya not me,cuz I spit shit dat make mics scared of my mouth
Is dis white boy tryna rap cause my eyes might lie
You should stab the dude who said you was a fly white guy
Dis a black thing,is whiteboy crazy
or is he just another imitation Slim Shady
You "23" on my list like a fake Jordan
Ya brains like"Ima quit dis rap shit and go back to skateboardin"


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Old 10-31-04, 10:17 AM   #7
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look at his hat its cocked 2 the side like he a g// is it just me or does he look like hes in elementary// get yo weight up boi rappin aint yo style//u can tell diss dudes favorite movie had 2 be 8 mile//talkin bout people that dont battle is a wussy//dog u consider yo right hand of bein pussy//and i aint got time to sum up this dude//when he still walkin round think sketchers is a name brand shoe//ima let somebody else finish you off//cause u like gume you think u hard nowin damn well u soft//
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Old 11-01-04, 07:10 PM   #8
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Yo, people rappin back @ me dissin me coza tha colour of ma skin ?
U need to put dem hatin lyricz down in 2 tha bin...
u sed shit like dat 2 me in real life ma fist wud be on tha end of ya chin
Battle me, ill release tha lyrical skillz held within
I kno none of u will message back sayin 'i wanna battle', all know ill win...
Lol, scared pussys.. probably cry if i kicked uze in tha shin

Serious, any u haterz actually wanna battle me
I'll battle any of u n win, seriously
Thinkin othawise, message back al set it up, n we'll see...
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Sum PPL say tha MCin Aint For Da White Race...
...Why This Sayin This When They Kno Its A Disgrase..
N Yeah Them PPL need a can of mase anna few hundred bullets released in a spray all ova der face /Just 2 Stick dem in der place /But really they aint racist,they just hatin on me coz dey cant match ma pace..
Seriously, if u really dont think MCin is for tha white ppl I aint gonna change ure oppinnionz so ay, I got one thing 2 say, An thats that ure umm GAY!
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Old 11-02-04, 06:22 PM   #9
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Nobody messaged me back lol... tha haterz + racists scared...
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Sum PPL say tha MCin Aint For Da White Race...
...Why This Sayin This When They Kno Its A Disgrase..
N Yeah Them PPL need a can of mase anna few hundred bullets released in a spray all ova der face /Just 2 Stick dem in der place /But really they aint racist,they just hatin on me coz dey cant match ma pace..
Seriously, if u really dont think MCin is for tha white ppl I aint gonna change ure oppinnionz so ay, I got one thing 2 say, An thats that ure umm GAY!
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Old 11-02-04, 06:33 PM   #10
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no one scared of you , you just a newb and dont nobody give a fuck and everybody that postsed in this thread is weak any way ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Old 11-02-04, 08:24 PM   #11
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this 2 that cat named young mix
dog i hurd that u aint into chicks

infact i thought they was seein u at club rainbow
then u cover it up like u got a fine hoe

when u jus tell her its a girls night out
then act like shes yo bitch jus fo some clout

so whats up young mix i jus pulled yo card
u faggot ass hoe bet u wont step up outcha yard

...punk ass racists dont get nooooo love haha jus thought id drop a lil somethin keep on rappin fly
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Old 11-03-04, 05:46 PM   #12
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Gimpz..
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Sum PPL say tha MCin Aint For Da White Race...
...Why This Sayin This When They Kno Its A Disgrase..
N Yeah Them PPL need a can of mase anna few hundred bullets released in a spray all ova der face /Just 2 Stick dem in der place /But really they aint racist,they just hatin on me coz dey cant match ma pace..
Seriously, if u really dont think MCin is for tha white ppl I aint gonna change ure oppinnionz so ay, I got one thing 2 say, An thats that ure umm GAY!
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Old 11-04-04, 08:55 AM   #13
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yall not accomplishin anything, jus battle tha man....but, seriously...if you callin out people cuz they scared or whatever the case may be...atleast cum raw...that was jus a rhyming PSA.....i know you can do betta than that...even battlin real life...
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Old 11-04-04, 10:09 AM   #14
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yer i can do much betta wha i written.... tha woz only a quick freestyle as it sez in tha title innit.....
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Sum PPL say tha MCin Aint For Da White Race...
...Why This Sayin This When They Kno Its A Disgrase..
N Yeah Them PPL need a can of mase anna few hundred bullets released in a spray all ova der face /Just 2 Stick dem in der place /But really they aint racist,they just hatin on me coz dey cant match ma pace..
Seriously, if u really dont think MCin is for tha white ppl I aint gonna change ure oppinnionz so ay, I got one thing 2 say, An thats that ure umm GAY!
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Old 11-04-04, 06:09 PM   #15
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Nice

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Yo Fly white Guy
Ya freestyles was nice,keep it up
My nigga wrote dat verse about you
and put it under my name.
No luv lost,right
If you wanna battle,Im down for dat
Oh yea,Sinn,I gotta get back at you for dat
You know dat,right
Holla
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