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View Poll Results: ((((((((Jay-SmileZ VS Lyrically Blest )))))
Lyrically Blest 1 16.67%
Jay-SmileZ 5 83.33%
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 11-14-04, 04:30 PM   #1
Jay-SmileZ
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Jay-SmileZ vs Lyrically Blest

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6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

30 minute checkin

30 minute to drop ya ryme...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-14-04 at 05:00 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.
 
Old 11-14-04, 04:41 PM   #2
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Lyrically Blest has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 04:41 PM.
 
Old 11-14-04, 04:43 PM   #3
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Jay-SmileZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 04:43 PM.
 
Old 11-14-04, 04:51 PM   #4
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Nigga you think you a challenge to battle,
Cop a nine to ya head you hear the clack-clack-clack and I dont mean your bone rattled,
Drop the games like you can actually score,
Bomb your shit...Gernades in your stomach like we goin' to war,
Nigga you can't touch me I stay intact,
Infact...Bring-It-Back..I'll rip the same track.
 
Old 11-14-04, 05:12 PM   #5
Jay-SmileZ
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hit wit "SoldeiR-RapZ" that drops like a "BoulderS-BAsH" only applause u get is when i cave ya chest to make "shoulder-ClaP"/
this homo drops rymes an "two-months-pass"... he thinks his ryme is breathless but its cause i made his "lungs-collapse"/
his carreer goes is lost like blind people listing maps, his flow will only get circulated is when he flushes his shitty raps//
this dude is like terror-ISTS with tur-BANS when they go thru security thet HEADS GETTING CHECKED QUICK/
half his rymes was homo-intended, thought of REAR ENDS when i posted no DICK-RIDING he thought i OFFENDED?/
only reason he rymes is cause they told'em grown n be spittEN he thought he might just get his homo virginity ended/
 
Old 11-14-04, 05:18 PM   #6
th-C
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Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

jay
nice multies, but bad structure..ur verse was more constructive and direct towards your opponent though and the punches hit nicely even though the flow was off..

lyrically
played punches and lines, and your verse was much shorter than your opponents, nothin was fluent and the rhyme scheme was simple, work on it.

Please return the favor.. check sig.
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Old 11-15-04, 12:45 AM   #7
Jay-SmileZ
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UPPIN...

YA want ya battles voted on?

Then vote mines an i vote yours simple as that homies
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Old 11-15-04, 11:38 AM   #8
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uppin for votes...ya want ya battles voted so vote mines an i'll vote yours
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Old 11-15-04, 12:40 PM   #9
LEazy
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Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

Is there explaining need in this battle? Hands down Jay took this. He crushed Lyrically blessed. Blessed...you need some damn punchlines in your battle dawg. Some personals, punches, multis, and maybe some wordplay and you'll be good. I see you got the talent...just in that verse it wasn't there. Keep tryin and you'll get up. But Jay just got this battle.
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Old 11-16-04, 10:23 AM   #10
Jay-SmileZ
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Uppin Vote My Battle I Vote Yours^^^^^

Lets Get This Battle Closed Yo
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Old 11-16-04, 10:36 AM   #11
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Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

Jay-SmileZ won HANDS DOWN....
better flow...
better punches that hit N connected harder...
verse was preety creative......
N all around was better i enjoyed it more VOCAB WAS BETTER N JUST WASNT NO COMP....

vote: Jay-SmileZ
 
Old 11-16-04, 10:02 PM   #12
Jay-SmileZ
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GOOD LOOKING FAMS^^^

I voted on your battles.....

(((((((((((((((((Vote in my battle i'll vote yours guyz!!!!!!!!!!))))))))))))))))))))))
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Old 11-16-04, 10:31 PM   #13
4fil
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Voted For: Lyrically Blest

jay.... you went over the limit asshole.... you should be d'qulified, lyrical... if you repot this faggot in rc complaints you cant an instant win....
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Old 11-17-04, 07:30 AM   #14
Jay-SmileZ
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^^^Ay u fucking fagot i didnt go over any limit its still one line its not a bar u fucking idiot!

Look at how small the posting area is fag...whenu do it in word pad its lengthed right...

check these battles out, they do the same thing an their lines are longer than mine fool

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=160336

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157801

this guys a fucking cock sucker....hate voting bitch!!!!
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Old 11-17-04, 10:10 AM   #15
GKillaz05
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Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

Jay-SmileZ - Good spit your punches wernt to bad.. and your flow wasnt to bad either.

Best Line - hit wit "SoldeiR-RapZ" that drops like a "BoulderS-BAsH" only applause u get is when i cave ya chest to make "shoulder-ClaP"/
this homo drops rymes an "two-months-pass"... he thinks his ryme is breathless but its cause i made his "lungs-collapse"/

Worst Line - this dude is like terror-ISTS with tur-BANS when they go thru security thet HEADS GETTING CHECKED QUICK/

Lyrically - your shit was WHACK!

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - Nigga you think you a challenge to battle,
Cop a nine to ya head you hear the clack-clack-clack and I dont mean your bone rattled,

OVERALL - Jay took this wit ease, the other guy had flow but thats about it. You need to work on throwin some punches in there and alot of other things you need to learn.

Vote - Jay-SmileZ

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