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11-22-04, 07:46 PM
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i call this keystyle "true expectations"..
IP: B788 F6A9
Sumtimes ma crazi mind makes me wonder,
If ppl were in my head it wuld cause dem slight discomfort, Im 15 but dont mistake me for wak juss becuz im younger, May not of been spittin of long, i still drop bombs of thunder, I got alotta green man but it aint feedin ma hunger, I dont give a fuck whut catagory yall hataz place me under, Ma mind races wit all these rhymes but i cant put em in action, When i write sum serious shit ill have sum lyrical satisfaction, I dont care about tha beef by an means or any of that shit, Cuz ill jus break thru tha barriers like a penis in plastic, It aint about tha money, cars, ho'z, or gas masks and, Tha killings, tha stealin, gettin convicted and bodily slashin, All this kid wants is sum recognition for tha music hez blastin, So hungry for this rap shit, ma body deterioratin like i been fastin, Fame, riches, bitches all that otha bullshit juss aint wat im afta, Ferget tha nigga dat got me inta rappin i dun need that bastard, Goin around makin accusations, and false miscalculations, Ima squash tha beef doe i got higher expectations, Ima get mine n show tha world exactly wat i done been thru, If i learned one thing from all this itz u gotta stick and move, This rap shit will go from white n gold to tinted black and blue, Play evn tha straitest like a game of C-low puttin 4,5,6 in you... |
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11-22-04, 07:51 PM
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Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
damn man pretty good shit...good flow and vocab but if u put more multi's the flow woulda been a lot better not sayin it wasnt but just givin pointers man keep it up tho...
tryout for my crew links in sig return the feed http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161571 peace~1
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