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Old 11-20-04, 05:48 PM   #1
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Quick Free...........help!!!

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this jus a quick free....

.....my first ever...........

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Old 11-20-04, 05:59 PM   #2
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damn turn ya vocals up...add some type of emotion to ya shit too....lyrics i couldnt really hear witout blastin the beat...so work on that man...
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Old 11-20-04, 06:07 PM   #3
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damn turn ya vocals up...add some type of emotion to ya shit too....lyrics i couldnt really hear witout blastin the beat...so work on that man...

agreed and leave 2 links you have given feedback on
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Old 11-20-04, 06:25 PM   #4
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o damn its not loud enough...........

......alright and it was early so i couldnt really put no emotion into it.........

..........but thanks for the feed.....
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Old 11-20-04, 06:29 PM   #5
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i gave feedback on calamity's freestyle and x-spitty...
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Old 11-21-04, 03:23 AM   #6
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Turn up the vocals. Flow was ok, but you need to put a little more emotion in your shit. Wow....that's it? LOL. Anyway, it didn't sound that bad, just turn your vocals up and write some shit down so you can actually spit something with emotion
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Old 11-21-04, 05:01 AM   #7
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alright but that was a free so i couldnt really put a lot of emotion into it anyway.......
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Old 11-21-04, 06:16 AM   #8
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for most emcee's if not all... freestyle is where there true emotion, flow, and so on shows.. lyrics might not be as ill as written though...

and yeah turn ya shit up... and spit a free when everythings clear and aint gotta worry bout nothing...and u can go all out...
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Old 11-21-04, 06:09 PM   #9
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alright thanks for the advice.....................
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Old 11-21-04, 10:40 PM   #10
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uppin for more feed.....................
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Old 11-21-04, 11:56 PM   #11
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anyone else with advice?...........
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Old 11-22-04, 02:36 AM   #12
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any more feed?..........................
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Old 11-22-04, 02:49 AM   #13
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Yea true turn up ya volume....but yea overall it was ok....nuttin too special....keep it up tho...pzz ~1~

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Old 11-22-04, 02:57 AM   #14
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alright thanks man.................
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