I know some people are gona hate this and others will like it just as with any other open mic but please take a minute to check it out and leave me some feedback i would realy appreciate that thank you.

This is an extended version of Emiinems anti-Bush song Mosh what i did here is i added an extra verse to it that i made to give the song more depth i know its to late to change the elections out come and all so i just wanted to express my own toughts by adding onto one of the already made songs.

Thanks for taking the time to read this.


Artists: Eminem & LexiKon
Song: Mosh (extended version)

[ Intro ]

I pledge allegiance to the flag of the United States of America
And to the Republic for which it stands
One nation under God
Indivisible·
It feels so good to be back

[ Verse 1 ]

Scrutinize every word, memorize every line
I spit it once, refuel, reenergize, and rewind
I give sight to the blind, mind sight through the mind
I excersize my right to express when I feel it's time
It's just all in your mind, what you interpret it as
I say to fight you take it as Im gonna whip someone's ass
If you don't understand don't even bother to ask
A father who has grown up with a fatherless past
Who has blown up now to rap phenomenon that has
Or at least shows no difficulty multi task
And juggling both, perhaps mastered his craft slash
Entrepreneur who has held long too few more rap acts
Who has had a few obstacles thrown his way through the last half
Of his career typical manure moving past that
Mister kiss his ass crack, he's a class act
Rubber band man, yea he just snaps back

[ Chorus ]

Come along, follow me as I lead through the darkness
As I provide just enough spark, that we need to proceed
Carry on, give me hope, give me strength,
Come with me, and I won't stear you wrong
Put your faith and your trust as I guide us through the fog
Till the light, at the end, of the tunnel, we gonna fight,
We gonna charge, we gonna stomp, we gonna march through the swamp
We gonna mosh through the marsh, take us right through the doors

[ Verse 2 ]

{ LexiKon }

The country's gone into recession
and the president just sits there with a blank expression
he expects everything to be done for-him
and somehow like puppets we still adore-him
even though we cant stand much more-of-him
if he was an orphan we wouldnt talk of him AS badly
then he couldnt go on sattisfying his daddy
I wish America would set aside its ignorance
and try a colored president
since the African American population is gaining percent
it would make perfect sense
to experiment with this difference
maybe some one could improve this nation
and calm down the war thats ragin

[ Chorus ]

[ Verse 3 ]

{ Eminem }

To the people up top, on the side and the middle,
Come together, let's all bomb and swamp just a little
Just let it gradually build, from the front to the back
All you can see is a sea of people, some white and some black
Don't matter what color, all that matters is we gathered together
To celebrate for the same cause, no matter the weather
If it rains let it rain, yea the wetter the better
They ain't gonna stop us, they can't, we're stronger now more then ever,
They tell us no we say yea, they tell us stop we say go,
Rebel with a rebel yell, raise hell we gonna let em know
Stomp, push up, mush, fuck Bush, until they bring our troops home come on just . . .

[ Chorus ]

[ Verse 4 ]

{Eminem}

Imagine it pouring, it's raining down on us,
Mosh pits outside the oval office
Someone's trying to tell us something, maybe this is God just saying
we're responsible for this monster, this coward, that we have empowered
This is Bin Laden, look at his head nodding,
How could we allow something like this, Without pumping our fist
Now this is our, final hour
Let me be the voice, and your strength, and your choice
Let me simplify the rhyme, just to amplify the noise
Try to amplify the times it, and multiply it by six
Teen million people are equal of this high pitch
Maybe we can reach Al Quaida through my speech
Let the President answer on high anarchy
Strap him with AK-47, let him go
Fight his own war, let him impress daddy that way
No more blood for oil, we got our own battles to fight on our soil
No more psychological warfare to trick us to think that we ain't loyal
If we don't serve our own country we're patronizing a hero
Look in his eyes, it's all lies, the stars and stripes
They've been swiped, washed out and wiped,
And Replaced with his own face, mosh now or die
If I get sniped tonight you'll know why, because I told you to fight

[ Chorus ]

[ Verse 5 ]

{ LexiKon }

This aint a song this is an impeachment speach
that i hope will reach and teach
each and everyone of you
and make you think of what our so called leader has done to you
cant you see him lookin down on us mockingly
whats goin on i thought America was a democracy
so why did he accept the task
of declaring war and didn't even ask
we the people why must he be so evil
i bet Kerry wouldn't have ever been so deceitful
now dont get me wrong im not choosin a side
im simply clarifying the things on my mind
im pissed about our troops dying and Georgey boy just doesn't react
why dont you go fight and see if you stay in tact
now you rather hide behind your little inocent mask
and keep gettin brainwashed by the Bush of the past*
{Speaking: And you call your self the hope of America}

[ Chorus ]

[ Outro ]

And as we proceed, to mosh through this desert storm, in these closing statements, if they should argue, let us beg to differ, as we set aside our differences, and assemble our own army, to disarm this weapon of mass destruction that we call our president, for the present, and mosh for the future of our next generation, to speak and be heard, Mr. President, Mr. Senator




*{refering to bush senior}

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that really should be done on audio play the verses of eminem off his cd then do your verses that will fuckin kick ass i was really feelin every word u said and i'm majorly down

thanks i appreciate the feedback i might do it in audio im gona make a request for the beat so i can cut the beat in the places where my verse will be thanks again


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upin please vote

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damn...u really got dis out of tha past...i read dis b4 but i didnt leave feed...i just clicked tha poll...i agree wit dawg and i'll give u a 8/10 cuz dis was dope as hell...keep it up and check out everythang in my sig...plz

and vote in my battle...thanx in advance for all dat...4real

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