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08-15-04, 12:17 PM | #1 | |||||||
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My World... song im workin on
IP: 2C69 8F6D
(verse 1)
that faithful day i was born the whole world stopped my parents thought i would grow up and write hiphop they knew it would be hard for a boy growin up in poverty plus the struggle of race diversity, blood shed and robbery living in fear, hard bein able to kill and not shed a tear after all these years i got no fear, my life has led me here where the glocks gon pop, and them locks dont lock cops on the dirty block murderin niggas by the flocks bullets thru my body, been shot more than scotty 2 hotty hospitals know me by name, ask for my autograph like Boty slaughterin niggas on and off the court like it aint a game running drugs from west to east, that’s my claim to fame E’s my name, all drugs round the block its all the same niggas know not to fuck with me, they be left in a flame (hook x2) my life, my time, my world and im livin like its my last fuck with me and it’ll b ur ass, im not scared to blast all the snitches get punked like bitches in my hood it aint a game on my block, livin life like its all good (verse 2) startin verse 2 like i ended the first, leavin hataz in a hurse my niggas needin money so bad we snatchin out a purse its crazy how all these skanky ass hoes wanna get laid but u ask her to give a nigga head without gettin paid she up and leaves with nothin on but black lace panties its a gamble walkin my block, you can get shot for yo rocks shot by the cops if you aint payin to push yo rock on the block da worst birth place in da worst state wit da highest murder rate bodies found in abandoned buildings exposing skeleton virtabre im rockin wit tops, popin with glocks until my mans got popp'd he's in a wheel chair, i wish i could say the same for his pops i possess the most deadly agression, so when im stressin im hoody dressin and steppin to sections with my wessons (hook x2) my life, my time, my world and im livin like its my last fuck with me and it’ll b ur ass, im not scared to blast all the snitches get punked like bitches in my hood it aint a game on my block, livin life like its all good |
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08-15-04, 12:18 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
heres an open mic i left feedback at..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142409 |
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08-15-04, 12:24 PM | #3 | ||||||||
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IP: 6B78 0379
Nice, yo 8/10.
Rate my stuff if you get a chance honest votes.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142575
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08-15-04, 01:12 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: C5E4 FB97
yea, man, overall this was a nice drop. I was feelin' it. You had dope flow on this, man. I liked it nice job. Vocab was aiight, you could up it a little bit more. But it was a nice job, man. If you doin' this in audio, I don't kno how good it would flow, but it depends on the beat you used. But yea, man, tight job. Keep droppin'
I give it a 8.5/10 |
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08-15-04, 03:01 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
thanks for the feedback..uppin for more
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08-15-04, 08:14 PM | #6 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 3CB0 FA3B
I liked it alot..Talkin like the whole world goes around u but itz all good.
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So what chicks can rap too/ you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/ Respect List: AKA (down, and keepin it real) KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words) The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping) Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em') phatom (he jus got skill) LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life) fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat) |
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08-15-04, 08:16 PM | #7 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: 85C0 F54B
yo nice shit yo bad gurl join ma crew
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08-16-04, 02:26 AM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
uppin for more feedback
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08-16-04, 04:20 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
uppin
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08-18-04, 11:18 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
uppin for some feedback
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08-19-04, 06:10 AM | #11 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: 5043 32F4
ya it was ok i wasent feelin all of it but for the most part i was 6.5/10 good shit
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Sup Boi |
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08-21-04, 04:59 PM | #12 | |||||||
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IP: 2C69 8F6D
uppin fo feedback
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08-21-04, 05:23 PM | #13 | |||||
{: DOPE \>:}
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IP: 97C4 5CAB
not bad good shit
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DUn duN dUn....... |
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12-08-04, 09:22 PM | #14 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 3240 794D
Nice shit...I feel the same way sometimes man...Nice flow, everything was in place...overall, nice piece...8/10...1
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