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Old 08-15-04, 12:17 PM   #1
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My World... song im workin on

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(verse 1)
that faithful day i was born the whole world stopped
my parents thought i would grow up and write hiphop
they knew it would be hard for a boy growin up in poverty
plus the struggle of race diversity, blood shed and robbery
living in fear, hard bein able to kill and not shed a tear
after all these years i got no fear, my life has led me here
where the glocks gon pop, and them locks dont lock
cops on the dirty block murderin niggas by the flocks
bullets thru my body, been shot more than scotty 2 hotty
hospitals know me by name, ask for my autograph like Boty
slaughterin niggas on and off the court like it aint a game
running drugs from west to east, that’s my claim to fame
E’s my name, all drugs round the block its all the same
niggas know not to fuck with me, they be left in a flame

(hook x2)
my life, my time, my world and im livin like its my last
fuck with me and it’ll b ur ass, im not scared to blast
all the snitches get punked like bitches in my hood
it aint a game on my block, livin life like its all good

(verse 2)
startin verse 2 like i ended the first, leavin hataz in a hurse
my niggas needin money so bad we snatchin out a purse
its crazy how all these skanky ass hoes wanna get laid
but u ask her to give a nigga head without gettin paid
she up and leaves with nothin on but black lace panties
its a gamble walkin my block, you can get shot for yo rocks
shot by the cops if you aint payin to push yo rock on the block
da worst birth place in da worst state wit da highest murder rate
bodies found in abandoned buildings exposing skeleton virtabre
im rockin wit tops, popin with glocks until my mans got popp'd
he's in a wheel chair, i wish i could say the same for his pops
i possess the most deadly agression, so when im stressin
im hoody dressin and steppin to sections with my wessons

(hook x2)
my life, my time, my world and im livin like its my last
fuck with me and it’ll b ur ass, im not scared to blast
all the snitches get punked like bitches in my hood
it aint a game on my block, livin life like its all good
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Old 08-15-04, 12:18 PM   #2
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heres an open mic i left feedback at..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142409
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Old 08-15-04, 12:24 PM   #3
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Nice, yo 8/10.

Rate my stuff if you get a chance honest votes..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142575
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Old 08-15-04, 01:12 PM   #4
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yea, man, overall this was a nice drop. I was feelin' it. You had dope flow on this, man. I liked it nice job. Vocab was aiight, you could up it a little bit more. But it was a nice job, man. If you doin' this in audio, I don't kno how good it would flow, but it depends on the beat you used. But yea, man, tight job. Keep droppin'

I give it a 8.5/10
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Old 08-15-04, 03:01 PM   #5
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thanks for the feedback..uppin for more
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Old 08-15-04, 08:14 PM   #6
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I liked it alot..Talkin like the whole world goes around u but itz all good.
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Old 08-15-04, 08:16 PM   #7
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yo nice shit yo bad gurl join ma crew
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Old 08-16-04, 02:26 AM   #8
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Old 08-16-04, 04:20 PM   #9
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Old 08-18-04, 11:18 PM   #10
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Old 08-19-04, 06:10 AM   #11
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ya it was ok i wasent feelin all of it but for the most part i was 6.5/10 good shit
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Old 08-21-04, 04:59 PM   #12
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Old 08-21-04, 05:23 PM   #13
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not bad good shit
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Old 12-08-04, 09:22 PM   #14
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Nice shit...I feel the same way sometimes man...Nice flow, everything was in place...overall, nice piece...8/10...1
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