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View Poll Results: Poetikal Panda -Vs- Tstorm
Tstorm 5 83.33%
Poetikal Panda 1 16.67%
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 10-24-04, 01:29 PM   #1
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Poetikal Panda vs Tstorm

IP: EB75 6D9D

Battle Rules:

10 Line's
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Topical Battle: Beautiful Garden-10 Line's

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-24-04 at 01:59 PM

Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in.
 
Old 10-24-04, 01:30 PM   #2
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Tstorm has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 01:30 PM.
 
Old 10-24-04, 01:31 PM   #3
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Poetikal Panda has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 01:31 PM.
 
Old 10-24-04, 01:43 PM   #4
Conclusion
Formidable
 
IP: EB75 6D9D

Here Go's
Savouring The Sweet Fruit's & Asset's Of a Glorious Haven-
Fluent In WildLife Like Butterfly's & Squirrel's & a Presence of a Raven-
Assortment's Of Flower's Emboss & Bless The Natural Essence-
The Odour Of God's Friut's Cause's a Mind Reaction To a Reminiscennce-
Ivy Leave's Curl & Trickle Down into a Twisted Heap Of Mixed Green-
It was Like Standing In the Forbidden Garden With The Holy Lord & Adam & Eve-
My Heart felt Warm, Warm because it felt like i was being Cradled In the arm's Of Mother Nature-
Angelic Figure's Watched The Development Of The Produce's Of the Creator-
My Feeling's Were Lost & My Soul Had Been Washed & was Now Clean-
Superior To The Cloud's Which Habited Heaven It was The Most Enlightening Place i had ever seen-
Again sorry the Line's Were Stretched But Oh well....G'Luck
 
Old 10-24-04, 01:52 PM   #5
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as the evening sunlight penetrates, so subsides the misty haze
the water fountain,the tranquill beauty of the hegerowed maze
amazed how the crazy paving adourns the lillys in all there glory
the whole place bustling with life, each creature telling a story
the pragmatic stones, entwining time and reavealing affirmation
water fountain calms the soul, frogs providing visual fascination
wind blows with surgical prescission,whistles the autumn leaves
the overwhelming riches of the magpie..mother natures thieves
poppys produce a refined divine beauty..coulors set me alight
through the day an ellegance, but its real beauty comes at night.
 
Old 10-24-04, 01:53 PM   #6
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as the evening sunlight penetrates, so subsides the misty haze
the water fountain,the tranquill beauty of the hegerowed maze
amazed how the crazy paving adourns the lillys in all there glory
the whole place bustling with life, each creature telling a story
the pragmatic stones, entwining time and reavealing affirmation
water fountain calms the soul, frogs providing visual fascination
wind blows with surgical prescission,whistles the autumn leaves
the overwhelming riches of the magpie..mother natures thieves
poppys produce a refined divine beauty..coulors set me alight
through the day an ellegance, but its real beauty comes at night
 
Old 10-24-04, 01:54 PM   #7
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sorry kinda fucked the post.....................

there both the same so...........
 
Old 10-24-04, 01:55 PM   #8
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DQ Me if you want i went over the Line limit up to you..........SORRY
 
Old 10-24-04, 01:59 PM   #9
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nah its cool.........think they were jus a lil stretched but its cool.........
uppin the votes
 
Old 10-24-04, 04:42 PM   #10
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Formidable
 
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Upping for this Battle peep's
 
Old 10-24-04, 06:33 PM   #11
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Uppin For Vote's Peep's
 
Old 10-25-04, 05:26 AM   #12
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Upping for more Votes Peeps........
 
Old 10-25-04, 11:10 AM   #13
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Upping this thread fo' Vote's Peep's..........
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Old 10-25-04, 12:31 PM   #14
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uppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
 
Old 10-25-04, 01:28 PM   #15
ghetto cripple
bringin' new thoughts to the name disability-flossed in tight wear shiny shoes you feelin' me
 
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This was feedback posted for Poetikal Panda

IP: CD96 0C90

oh my motherfuckin god, this is fuckin crazy ass shit lickin god damn, i was fuckin feelin every fuckin word, and i mean every word.
what i like most about this battle was that in here "rapverse" we all are dissin each other and shit like im kill this ass and fuck you dick, but ya'll are battlin about a fuckin garden that shit is fuckin tight as a fuck, now i was goin to vote but both of yours are so good i cant, tsrtorm yours was shorter than pand'as but you shouldnt lose because of that, i cant vote, you both did awsome good luck.
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Big Woody K.O.
Da Solution 5-1
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Da Jokah K.O.
Whiskey 5-2
dawgfatha_13 5-3

 
 


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