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Old 11-17-04, 11:21 PM   #1
.Wicked One.
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Lust or Love Ft.Fluidmoon

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Yeah....hot one rite here....


Hun, u got me confused and stun
like a dog, i just wanna lick u wit my tung
being around u...my soldier's never hung
Could this be lust or could this be love? Huh?.
Hun, u got me confused and stun
Like a dog, i just wanna lick u wit my tung
Being around u...my soldier's never hung
Could this be lust or could this be love? Huh?

(Wicked One)
Walking thru the halls n saw u right before class...
Long time no see, been a min. since we chit chat...
Had a crush on u and i could see u were with that...
Even tho u had a man that u love and he loved back...
I was still skeemin on hitting your kitty kat...
Yall had ur little spit spat, i bring it up forget that...
Now that he's gone she single n lost off track...
Me n him were cool but someones gotta keep that ass phat...
Gurl is thick beautiful with natural tits and a pretty face...
Thinkin how bad i twist her up wit my tung if she gave me a taste...
If that was the case I'd take her to the right place...
Undress and unlace her garments with no time to waste...
Now don't get me wrong it ain't all about sex...
But she'd look so good with her bent and stretched...
I wanna keep the connect close she deserves my respect...
But just givin her a check from the waist down and up pass her neck...
Leaves me outta breath covered in sweat...
Gurls got finesse wish i could get her but it'd be a test...
And a smile to light up the sun and warm the whole west...
She always shows up looking her best, going after her gives me no regrets...

Hun, u got me confused and stun
like a dog, i just wanna lick u wit my tung
being around u...my soldier's never hung
Could this be lust or could this be love? Huh?.
Hun, u got me confused and stun
Like a dog, i just wanna lick u wit my tung
Being around u...my soldier's never hung
Could this be lust or could this be love? Huh?

(Fluidmoon)
The longing, the need for you near me is strong,
But my thoughts are clouded by sex,is that wrong?
Tingles up my spine when you touch my naked body,
Cradled in warmth,your arms feel like home to me,
My blood boils, as my heart melts into your depth,
Eyes gleam as we lay, feeding off eachothers breath,
When your not here, i carry your scent in my memory,
Each moment we spend together is like christmas,
The butterflies in my stomach remain new, like gifts,
I'm hooked on this,feeling,cannot break this love,
But is it? when i pine only for your touch?

Hun, u got me confused and stun
like a dog, i just wanna lick u wit my tung
being around u...my soldier's never hung
Could this be lust or could this be love? Huh?.
Hun!, u got me confused and stun
Like a dog, i just wanna lick u wit my tung
Being around u...my soldier's never hung
Could this be lust or could this be love? Huh?

(Wicked One)
When i spotcha i gotcha on lock gurl...
My heart pounds n it doesn't seem to stop gurl...
Type I adore galore i think i got the hots for...
Just standing there makes me wantcha much more...
Give me a tease just showing off ya shorts...
Then ya bend over just so i can glimpse ur draws...
I'm feelin some butterflies in my belly for sure...
Skin so soft and so pure what draws me toward...
Ur so shy but u wink an eye just to tease these guys...
No surprise I wanna be...between them thighs...
Like a Cracker Jack box i gotta dig deep inside...
For the prize and once i find it.. i still play with it at times...
I stay by ur side, you don't have to confine yourself and hide...
I'm here for you whether i'm ur companion..or your guide...
No need to sigh and cry if ur curious just take me for a ride,it'll be alright...

Hun, u got me confused and stun
like a dog, i just wanna lick u wit my tung
being around u...my soldier's never hung
Could this be lust or could this be love? Huh?.
Hun, u got me confused and stun
Like a dog, i just wanna lick u wit my tung
Being around u...my soldier's never hung
Could this be lust or could this be love? Huh?


Yeah give some feedback then peace...........
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Old 11-18-04, 01:45 PM   #2
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upppppiiiiinnnnnn....................for some feed...............1
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Old 11-18-04, 04:45 PM   #3
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I Must Say I Liked This Drop.feelin' The Flow Of The Whole Thing.hook Was Catchy And Vocab Was Decent.fluid Feelin' Ur Verse The Most Tho'.good Drop Overall9/10........................keep Droppin'
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Old 11-18-04, 08:34 PM   #4
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Yeah.....nice feedback i guess........anyways Uppin......peace......
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Old 11-19-04, 03:42 PM   #5
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Dayum ......Come on people leave some feedback...peace...
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Old 11-22-04, 11:24 PM   #6
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Cmon...people uppin this.....Dayum.....Open mics just been being slept on these days.....
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Old 11-23-04, 05:38 AM   #7
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concept is pretty coo flow was pretty good on both parts structure was decent to chorus was aight vocab could have been upped a tad over-all pretty solid drop

favourite barz from wicked one

I was still skeemin on hitting your kitty kat...
Yall had ur little spit spat, i bring it up forget that...
Now that he's gone she single n lost off track...
Me n him were cool but someones gotta keep that ass phat

favourite barz from fluidmoon

Each moment we spend together is like christmas,
The butterflies in my stomach remain new, like gifts,
I'm hooked on this,feeling,cannot break this love,
But is it? when i pine only for your touch?

stay up -1NE-
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Old 11-23-04, 07:43 PM   #8
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this was good...vocab ya agreed with RKS...good of been uped and emotion pretty good...overall this was a tight drop...8/10..

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