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Old 11-23-04, 02:03 AM   #1
RhymeSosweet
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ENERGY....lol yall aint ready....

IP: 0DA5 D7BF

aight yall this my first open mic on tha site so peep game

Energy

I spit wit energy let me kno if you feel me
My rhymes leave niggas in shock cryin out conspiracy
Ima wild in a battle I apply that pressure
Im A nigga’s dream gurl prize and only treasure
In battles I unlash my skill take over my opponents control
While they tryin to think of their lyrics my punches unload
I hold the strength and tha electricity
Give my enemy’s tha pain they have no expectancy
Ya gurl Sosweet constantly creatin rhyme friction
Bestowed with the gift to make death predictions
Shit I got the power knock you off the seers tower
Like a tiger on a blood hunt Weak mc lyrics I devour
Im tha dragon cuz i spit that fire
Lift ur soul quicker than any church quire
I need a crew somebody show me the best empire
After Blowin ppl away I get lyrically exhausted
When I got into major drama I straight lost it
So for all yall who don’t know me bow down to ur authority
Cuz I stay rhymein with effective intensesity I got mad energy

aight its whateva...holla at ya gurl
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Old 11-23-04, 12:25 PM   #2
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nice drop..... feelin' this joint.vocab and structure was good.1st drop huh.good job.8/10...keep em comin......
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N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 11-23-04, 04:24 PM   #3
RhymeSosweet
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yea it was tha first drop on RV but thanks i try a lil bit lil bit ya kno how i do

aight everybody dont sleep on my shit...lets hear tha comments

...holla at ya gurl
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Old 11-23-04, 05:09 PM   #4
atti?
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Thaaaaaaaats Whats Up...
My Girl Coming With All The Stops On This One...
Very Nice Piece Overall...
Some Nice Punches, Smooth Flow, Just Overall Nice...
Good Job Fem...
Way To Come Outa The Gates Strong...
Stay Up...
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Old 11-23-04, 11:44 PM   #5
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thanks abstrakt ya gurl doin big things

uppin for feedbak lets hear dem comments

...holla at ya gurl
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Old 11-23-04, 11:45 PM   #6
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was alright ok peice......
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