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11-25-04, 01:54 AM
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Commitment
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..Are you Possible..or drawn from my Imagination.. ..Mind or no Matter..I'll be here..Addly Waiting.. ..If my brains togeter..Or if my mind is spacing.. ..I'll be there..Addly Waiting..are you truly here to help.. ..or a spectator here to watch me fail..its a wonder.. ..why people will say things..although I'm still here addly .. ..waiting..To laugh behind a persons back..is ..a synonym to put a knife in it..you see his life ending.. ..didn't know his past..As I addly wait..and see another face.. ..I do drag alone..I keep my pace..and erase the trase.. ..My commitment to you..has grew..and yet you Subtract.. ..Washed up like a dishwasher..or dispose me in trash.. ..either way this canot last..I'm on a collision course..and.. ..I have yet to crash..the point is..mean what you act.. ..don't act like you mean it..I've seen it..its Fact.. ..keep your commitment.. -Indeph
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11-25-04, 02:42 AM
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damn dope piece man you been doin your thing man keep it up......
much respect peace~1
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11-26-04, 03:02 PM
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This was dope man,your words and strucutre were perfect for this type of heartfelt piece, i was really feelin this poem man, keep droppin,i look forward to what you have to say...1
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