VERSES DUE BY FRIDAY, TRY AND GET THEM UP BY WEDNESDAY IF YOU CAN.


30 LINE MAX


VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE..


MAKE THIS HOT!!

Check In, what up Yung Gunnah...let's make this one hot for the audience..LOL....holla back..1

Yo I'm a drop a 10 bar verse, I don't know about u Yung Gunnah....Either match it or whatever...1

Yo Repitwa, I think he's a no show....1

Yo Young Gunnah, go get yourself a new burner/
Or move to Mount Vernon, Cause ma shots will burn ya/
Cause You couldn't flow pure even if you drank out of Berta/
You beatin' me is unhearda, like a Nun committin' murda/
And the only way your spittin' heat at me is threw 'talking' man/
So stop the walkman and start walkin' man/
Cause most of your rhymes comes from another rapper/
Like little kids who can't rap without their father/
Plus I fire shots so accurate they call me "Acura"/
Without the Honda label in front/
Cause bitches like you sit on the tabel and front/
I lack fear cause I'm able to confront/
And I ain't the truth cause I lie with my right hand raised/
Repitwa got me battlin' little kids cause his right hand man isn't raised/

checkin in, my fault i aint been online since last week, here go's some quick shit

I'm hot kid, You'll never ever touch dis guy//
Your style iz like your girl's pussy,"...IT's KINDA DRY"//
I spit so tight, money aint got da space to get loose//
Dis battle is like a ho givin head wit no tongue, no use//
Your flow is like a broken furnace, you ain't able to send heat//
You fuck around and get cerebrum melted, All over Your street//
I'm like a train wit no brakes, It's hard to stop me//
Your flow iz like a 4 year old's hand writing...........SLOPPY!!!!//

Why u got money in ya name, when u aint gettin none Dummy?//
Oh, I get it, da F in front must stand for Fuck money//
U get a battle rep and think dat your flow is tight//
da only booth you been in wuz on da RB site//
It's really a suprise to me if u be actually writin'//
cause like a cannibal suckin dick, you love bitin'//

^^^Good shit dog....let's start the voting

vote: yung gunna
F money had more played lines and his punches didn't hit as hard...
Yunggunnah has more of an audio flow so it made me read it as if i was bouncin to dat shit on a radio so it make me *wanna read it*...
AIGHT verses from both of you but yunggunnah caught my eye alil bit more

well both verses werent the best on this site...

but F money, weak, wack, sorry dog, ya shit was basic. flow wasnt really good, punchs weak, wordplay, play scrabble to get some play with words....


gunna, aint punchs were nice, basic, but nice... wordplay was there some... this is pretty nice, metas were there.....

vote: Yung Gunna

ummmmm boooooo, not a good battle ... never
underestimate and expect a no show ... anyway

f money bagz- i wazn't feelin u, played punchez
basic shyt .. way 2 simple kiddo, not feelin anything

yung gunnah- u didn't do no better .. u dissed hiz
girl harder den u dissed him ... aiight punchez
wordplay iz 2 simple, metaz were ok

my vote: yung gunnah

the word for 2day iz elevation

ok


yung gun you lacked hard punches
your wordplay was iight, vocab wasn't seein that much

f...punches were hitting harder, vocab had more, good play the same


vote-f money

__________________
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/htt...stid=628207.jpg

3-1 Young Gunnah

vote= younggunnah, like my man said up there f-money was kinda played and his punches just weren't as hard.

__________________
1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

FMONEYBAGS::


Yo Young Gunnah, go get yourself a new burner/
Or move to Mount Vernon, Cause ma shots will burn ya/
NOT A GOOD OPENER , FILLER THATS A NO NO



Cause You couldn't flow pure even if you drank out of Berta/
You beatin' me is unhearda, like a Nun committin' murda/
AGAIN SIMPLE AND BASIC SHIT



And the only way your spittin' heat at me is threw 'talking' man/
So stop the walkman and start walkin' man/
BLAH...


Cause most of your rhymes comes from another rapper/
Like little kids who can't rap without their father/
MAN THE LAST BATTLE YOU HAD WAS BETTER..THIS SO FAR IS SHIT..


Plus I fire shots so accurate they call me "Acura"/
Without the Honda label in front/
NOOOO


Cause bitches like you sit on the tabel and front/
I lack fear cause I'm able to confront/
BLAHHAH


And I ain't the truth cause I lie with my right hand raised/
Repitwa got me battlin' little kids cause his right hand man isn't raised/
NOT GOOD MAN.



YUNGUNNAH:::

I'm hot kid, You'll never ever touch dis guy//
Your style iz like your girl's pussy,"...IT's KINDA DRY"//
NOT BAD OF AN OPENING, DECENT PUNCH


I'm hot kid, You'll never ever touch dis guy//
Your style iz like your girl's pussy,"...IT's KINDA DRY"//
OK NOT TOO HARD



Your flow is like a broken furnace, you ain't able to send heat//
You fuck around and get cerebrum melted, All over Your street//
SORTA FUNNY


I'm like a train wit no brakes, It's hard to stop me//
Your flow iz like a 4 year old's hand writing...........SLOPPY!!!!//
BLAHH



Why u got money in ya name, when u aint gettin none Dummy?//
Oh, I get it, da F in front must stand for Fuck money//
NOOO



U get a battle rep and think dat your flow is tight//
da only booth you been in wuz on da RB site//
NOT EFFECTIVE..BUT IN THIS BATTLE YEAH..




It's really a suprise to me if u be actually writin'//
cause like a cannibal suckin dick, you love bitin'//
NOT A GOOD ENDING..BUT YOUR VERSE OUTSHINED HIS



VOTE YUNGGUNNAH, THOUGHT BOTH VERSES WERE OK NOTHING TOO SPECTACULAR.BUT YUNG CAME WITH MORE PUNCHES AND FMONEY CAME TOO WEAK MAN..SIGH

VOTE YUNGGUNNAH