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Old 12-07-04, 03:20 PM   #1
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18 lines of heat

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I ain't tha Violent type, But I'll slap-cocks-and-bend-ya,
Cuz I'm all Around tha Board like Caps-lock-ta-Enter,
Getcha Fronts-knocked-mister! You-ain't-Even-close,
And I won't Even-boast, you'll see it wen ya backs-against-tha-ropes,
Then I'm spittin-facts-about-tha-Flow, It's Fuckin crazy dude,
The Magnitude about the Sickness streches like tha truth,
It's Gut wrenchin, And tha Tension Will just Blow you all to Hell,
Cuz I'm Summin like School..Except for I Show-THEN-Tell,
You ain't shown-no-Real, Frontin like you From-Them-Sets,
Needs-Not-Met? I'm likely to Blow more Than Jumbo-Jets,
Never take it back cuz Only SOME-regret, Decisions they make,
I was Risin-from-hate, Like Decoy birds ya'll Pigeons-is-fake,
Dem Incisions-is-great, Never stoppin Till I make tha top-of-tha-list,
Been Rocked-witta-fist, Cuz They know I'm Stock-witta-risk,
Also been praised-for-these-lips, Understatment..God on these streets,
Wasn't safe till I copped to this heat, Popped a Top to smitherines,
But I'mma Be real..Rewind this, Never shot shit..15..whom i kidding..?
We're spittin Only leave Oppressions...Life is Precious...
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Old 12-07-04, 08:50 PM   #2
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uppin this shit....................don't sleep on me
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Old 12-07-04, 09:01 PM   #3
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alright drop...you had some go multi's in there and some wordplay....structure was there but u just need to work on ur punches...other than that all was good

7/10

return tha favor in my open mic called "empty bottlez"

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Old 12-07-04, 09:50 PM   #4
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8.5/10...ur metas was hella tite...but the flow was a little off...im feelin it tho...nice drop...~1~...
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Old 12-07-04, 10:06 PM   #5
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nice drop 8/10 need work on ur vocab lil bit
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Old 12-07-04, 10:33 PM   #6
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nice drop flow was tight and vocab was ok nice work
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Old 12-08-04, 03:44 PM   #7
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this was a nice drop M...i felt tha shit....check out my shit "Half Full.....i'll give this a 7/10...nice drop
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Old 12-08-04, 11:47 PM   #8
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oo-shit this was tight mang....

whats good mentally-ill lets collabo on something........

now i know where u been at in open mic i thought u wasnt active at all....

keep doing ya thing fam this was good flow good punches was preety good, metas was good and everything fell prefect in this....

8.5 outta 10 nice drop.....

V.T niggas....

we still here fuck da haters........
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Old 12-09-04, 12:55 AM   #9
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whats good fam can u drop feed back on this open mic diss to wreckage...

its call the HERB-A-NATOR http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=164865
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Old 12-09-04, 01:29 AM   #10
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no doubt.............................................
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