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Old 12-08-04, 06:11 PM   #1
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Your All I Got

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Your the one I can count on ta listen to my thoughts
without you I'd be nothin cuz your all that I've got
and your the one I can tell all my dreams and fantisies
can come to you when these devilish thoughts are harrassin me
ur whom I speak my mind to when I'm havin thoughts of murda
twisted fantisies of killin I mean shit you neva heard of
you've never failed me, there to listen no matter the situation
from when my grandma died to when me and my girl was separatin
told you my infatuations, even told you all the things that I hate
there when I was an wreck, and to catch me when I break
you mean so much to me, I mean really your irreplaceable
want the world to know my opinions, without you I'm incapable
you take in my thoughts and words an amplify my feelings
gonna be the reason I blow up and sky rocket through the ceilings

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Old 12-09-04, 02:26 AM   #2
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Leave some feed back fuckers..
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Old 12-09-04, 02:39 AM   #3
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"Leave some feed back fuckers"????
u expect to get feed back from this shit sayin sumtin like that...hahaha

on the real though, i didn't like it
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Old 12-09-04, 03:12 PM   #4
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ON the real.....your wack LOL......And I'd merk you
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Old 12-09-04, 03:25 PM   #5
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ight was ight kid. nice flow. keep it up. peace
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Old 12-09-04, 07:25 PM   #6
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hahaha, yea son u might merk me

gimmea fuckin break, get outta here wit that wack shit
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Old 12-09-04, 08:17 PM   #7
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Set it up in FL and I'll merk you tonight.........
10 lines house rules......you drop first.....or I can....it doesn't matter
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Old 12-09-04, 09:50 PM   #8
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the flow was decent....
up ya vocab some....
try to get creative at-less more then u was...
try not to stay basic get a little more complex with ya verse...

all around decent for a noob...

6.0 outta 10....


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