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Old 12-04-04, 09:43 PM   #1
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Cool aint nobody come to my other one so...

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i cant take time wit my ryhmes
writin silly shit daily
and one day im gone offend somebody and get spayed G
and since im lazy im edgy
stayin at tha edge of my bed speakin in patterns dat aint okay wit dem
muthafuckin niggaz dat can really pull some triggas
and me bein tha bigga nigga i get hit quicker
than tha average nigga dat got speed and he got rings on
so before he get shot he'll hit a nigga until his teeth gone
shit i can really go on and on
over no damn beat
just me and me
gigglin like HE-HE-HE
but thats so G-A-E
or G-A-Y
fuck it im high
i should be somewhere starin at tha sky
like im a muthafuckin drag
dis tha life i dont want to have
smokin so fast
a nigga get muthafuckin jet lag
but until i meet again wit a better hook
i'll keep on recordin my thoughts in this computerized book
guess im really in tha zone now
and i cant stop till im done
till i know i fuckin won like Bush's son
that was politically ill-mattered but fuck it
im tha coldest flowee since Eminem on his drug trip
***its probably not hot but i want feedback on this one PLEASE!!!***
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Old 12-04-04, 10:26 PM   #2
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WTF WAS THAT............NO REALLY WAT WAS THAT..................THIS WAS SO WACK.....LOOK HOMO BITCH IF U THINKING ABOUT ME COMING AT ME LIKE THAT................COME CORRECTED..............CAUSE HERE U'VE FAILED..........

i cant take time wit my ryhmes
writin silly shit daily
and one day im gone offend somebody and get spayed G
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WTF

U AINT NO GANGSTA

SPRAYED G

WTF

KEEP YO PAWS OFF MY VOLCANO BITCH CAUSE U AITN READY FOR THIS HOTTNESS

I CAME, I SAW. I BROKE YA JAW BITCH

PRIMO MADONNA

SAY SOMTHING ELSE AND GET ME PISSED
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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Old 12-04-04, 10:43 PM   #3
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i got a premature baby nigga named drastic on my balls
talkin bout write some new shit to piss him off
so i decided a freewrite would be good for dis cat
damn, we know you dick lyrics so hit another track
thinkin that first flow was my best, you sadly mistaken
i'll hit you wit hard bars, come back and then knock you out for keepin me waitin
on a response dat a level of recon would probably resist
tha only way you can beat me is if you was my bitch and you grabbed my dick
shut tha fuck up nigga, you aint legit
holla at me wit some flows when you actually write some bitch
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Old 12-04-04, 10:47 PM   #4
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now can some real emcee's come and not get me mad. please
some folk are just on this site to try and down real niggaz but fuck them. tha hype is real.....
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Old 12-04-04, 10:48 PM   #5
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reallllllll shitttyyyy
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Old 12-04-04, 10:53 PM   #6
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FOR EVERYONE THAT HATES THIS:
i know this is bullshit. i only put it up cuz i want someone to say, "that shit is dumb. wonder if he can do better" GO CHECK OUT MY 8 BAR THREAD THAT I POSTED!!!
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