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Old 12-06-04, 01:05 AM   #1
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i need help to elavate!!
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k from wat u have i want everyones help plz no hate!! heres a rap i used to diss some one tell me wat i need to elavate on the most and rate everything!!!!

sayin nigga when your ass is probably white
bitch u aint shit when im done with u u think uve seen da light
like i say all u got is gay faggot jokes
im so good makin soljas to have strokes
callin me a ho
when u need bettah flow
my metapores are stronger then your punches
as i say again im da bully takin pussies lunches
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Old 12-06-04, 02:18 AM   #2
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lmao, sorry man

anyways,
this was way too simple,use some wit for God's sake
instead of just saying things straight out, be creative
most importantly work and i mean work on your punches & personals
you didn't have any... forget about "flow" and multies that wont
help you win, concentrate on strong disses...and dont talk about
yourself..the best thing you can do is battle as much as possible
and you'll get the hang of it
or not
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Old 12-06-04, 02:24 AM   #3
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Silence is a virtue.

It's good advice.
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Old 12-06-04, 02:28 AM   #4
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lol,
but actually patience is a virtue...
silence is golden
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Old 12-06-04, 02:41 AM   #5
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hmm...ur such a dumbass why u gon say "sayin nigga wen ur ass iz probly white"...U R WHITE!!! no racism but u make no sense....itz so basic put sum utha stuff all u do iz rhyme basic wordz no complexity at all...need structure work an flow work...u need single aspect of ur rap elevated....listen 2 sum cassidy...or sum game...over an over till it getz impounded in ur brain but don't use any of their linez i kno like all of 'em an i kno most of every1 in dipsetz linez
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Old 12-06-04, 03:44 AM   #6
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to elevate it takes time.. your starting to sound like sinner...
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Old 12-06-04, 03:54 AM   #7
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lol at sinner..... damn hes in his own catagory of wackness..
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Old 12-06-04, 03:58 AM   #8
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lol word to that but sinner started his wackness by constantly askin everyone for help and this reminded me of him so i bought it up
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Old 12-06-04, 03:59 AM   #9
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lol yeah...... but siiner aint never gonna mprove...
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Old 12-06-04, 04:18 AM   #10
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Ask your big brother empire on how 2 elevate..........well.

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Old 12-06-04, 04:25 AM   #11
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lmao.. nuff said...
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Old 12-06-04, 04:27 AM   #12
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lol..... i beat they dickride haard out
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Old 12-06-04, 04:42 AM   #13
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^^ lol true that.. n the thing is they're not even brothers.. one works at wendies n the other wears other peoples football jerseys... despite the name change thuglife you'll always be a wigger...
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Old 12-06-04, 09:16 AM   #14
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i wouldn't be suprised if empire decided to ghostwrite for his mini me one day
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