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12-03-04, 02:42 PM
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:::Open Wound's:::
IP: 9894 AD38
Every Wound Open's Up like Flower's In Blossom, Prizing The Memory's That Harrass My Mind...And Toss-Em, I Been Through Family Problem's, Chick Trouble's And Emerged Strong, Every Attempt At Turning Over a New Leaf, Alway's seem's To Go Wrong, My Heart Scathed & Scarred, From The Emotional Stress And Abrasion's, Reminding Myself Of The Day My Father Underwent His Fatal Operation, I Never Got To Utter My Final Word's In Company Of His Presence, Introduced To My Father 5 Month's Ago, Have Nothing To Reminiscence, Odour's And Hope's Linger In The Stale Air, Family Has Departed Me, I Need To Recapture The Frame Of Mind That Will Help Me Open My Eye's & See, People Who Don't Know Me, Try To Install Further Pain & Fear In My Life, I've Been Thru Enough....I Need Not To Carry The Burden Of Strife...., My Wrist's Look So Appealing, I Want To Damage Myself Beyond Healing, Mind Won't Stop & Start Believing, Confidence Drained From My Body, Even My Breathing. That Was a Freestyle. So I Dunno If It Is Up To Standard's.?
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12-03-04, 02:50 PM
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Feed Back . Will Be Returned.
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12-03-04, 03:19 PM
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IP: 9894 AD38
Please Feed The Panda!
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12-03-04, 03:47 PM
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IP: 9894 AD38
Feed The Fucking Panda, Stop Sleeping!
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12-03-04, 03:50 PM
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mess with me get cooked
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O Nice Fam....good Creativity And Meta'z Good Flow Fam Tha Struture Was An Lil Off.............work On That Vocab Fam.............8/10 Work On That Vocab O And I Felt An Lil Wordplay In There
Return An Fav Homie Poetic Scriptures "eye-full Of Tears And Peace" ^^^^^^^^^ Drop An Feed On That Peace
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12-03-04, 03:50 PM
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mess with me get cooked
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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM- Quote:
SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~! P.S.A COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM |
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12-03-04, 03:56 PM
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IP: 9894 AD38
Thank's For The Feed, I will rtf soon, up this.
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12-03-04, 04:54 PM
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IP: 9894 AD38
Upping Feed This Fucking Panda!
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12-03-04, 05:24 PM
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IP: 9894 AD38
Please Feed The Panda,!
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12-04-04, 06:56 AM
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IP: 4036 4A1E
Feed This Anerexic Panda, Only One Feed!
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12-07-04, 11:55 AM
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nice drop man..................was feelin:
My Heart Scathed & Scarred, From The Emotional Stress And Abrasion's, Reminding Myself Of The Day My Father Underwent His Fatal Operation, I Never Got To Utter My Final Word's In Company Of His Presence, Introduced To My Father 5 Month's Ago, Have Nothing To Reminiscence, dis was tightes part of drop - not sure if u goin wit da wordplay on "Reminiscence" cos its dnt work in dat context or u jus fed up, lol Shit was tight especially if jus a freestyle Get yo vocab on Structure was fine Overall - 8/10 Return tha favour on: my battle wit REALISTIK - link in sig Peace fam
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