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Check in by: 12-04-04 at 05:51 PM

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4Blood2Hound0 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-01-04 05:58 PM.

NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-01-04 07:33 PM.

we all kno that wen tha slug sounds..
ya gonna b 6 feet under after ya bodi gets found by a blood hound..

alreadi u shakin like a person with parkensis...
u couldn't spit "Fire" if u was convicted 4 arsonist...
1 chick n ya group but seems like its a " Star of Clicks"


who's tha dick who tried ta hype ya team up..
VT is "Beatin everi Bitch" like Ike did Tina....


ya chances of beatin me is like Jay haven a concert with no show..
yall thinkin ya crew got a title but aint grippin shit like ya logo..
beatin me is like fightin a gang solo..

no spots of fame even if u was 1 of tha Terroist Shining..
all ya group ugly so how r u Americas Finest..


all yall bitches want war is like female platoons...
some yall couldnt blow up if u was a human balloons..

i leave yall mouths foamin home like E.T...
its ashame that u couldnt even cee me n 3D...
i guess u don't get tha picture like a old TV

throughout tha battle its been heard 2 cee like Stevie..
rhymes leave u dissapeared like a trick 4rm whodini....

OH JOY MAN! approach the ghost and you get destroyed then,
Kinda puzzled cuz I was wonderin is ya avatar your boyfriends?
Slob Killa? Really...... well.... please don't battle cuz you not ill,
I spit fire like Godzilla bitch and you spit cum like ya moms will,
When my penis breaches her throat, go so deep she will choke,
You 'drop' and I 'rip' your 'ass,' like prisoners who reach for the soap,
I try to be peaceful but so? sometimes you gots to draw heat,
I will have you dropped quicker than the stock on Wall Street,
No doubt, its out that its a huge as mistake when you come here,
This new kid will get fucked up, i got jack-os number some where,
Haha, im jokin, but seriously, u think u could win? bitch your next,
Cuz you can't beat me, and jerkin me off is the closest you'll get,
Violent type needs your assist i bet, probable, nah of course you'll roast,
Cuz you'll be holdin the MIC. PUZZLED like wheel of fortune host,*
Those hollows follow and hit and that quick my target'll snap,
What? You from pistilvania? so ya hometowns a part of a plant?**
Fuck these clown, I'll dump these rounds as my pencil scars,
Im held accountable for my damage to ya, like rental cars,
My past won't last and thats why my gats is current,
Battle me? You can't without signin for rap insurance..

*Wheel of Fortune is a show where you solve the puzzle.. and the host has a mic... get it?
**He says hes from Pistilvania... Pistil-The central organ of a flower containing the ovules. The female part of a flower. That what I get for payin attention in class. lol

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Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0


4Blood2Hound0
got this hands down that newkid verse was weak as fuck and didnt intrest me at all no good punches no good noting flow was ok thats ya best point,
4blood verse was more original and had me way more intrested then newkid flow was better and all there wasnt much i aint like

vote: 4blood

Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

bloodhound>Newkid

Omg this battle is onesided like whoa..

Bloodhound:
you had some personals in there..in they were funny..
the flow caught on..and you didn't force any rhymes
the opener was good..2 bar was funny..and closer
wsa like a 8..you're very underated fam..I aint even know..
you win..

New Kid..since you lossed you basically get all negativity lol
sorry but have too..you had bad struc..adn rhyme scheme was bsaic..punchlines were played..sorry you lose

vote/Bhound

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Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

[Size=2]
Opener Was Nice Wast Better Then What You Usually Be Doing
Multis I Saw Some Dope Shit....The Flow Was Out There Came Harder And Better The Structure Was Neat Just Try To Line Up The Lines But Other Then That Every THing Was Dope....9/10

NewKid:
Okay First Of Opener Was Whack, And Your Structure Come On Now..Fix It Up A Little,This Is The New RapVerse Not Like Before Your Punches Wasnt Hitting Very Hard Your Flow Was A Disaster..Throw SOme Personals In There Too And Add Multis And Metas To Make It Feel Better....6.5/10


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Voted For: 4Blood2Hound0

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to NEWKID flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, 4BLOOD had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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