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Old 12-09-04, 07:13 PM   #1
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....All jokes all Beefs aside damnit...

real talk 4 a second

I wanna kno everybodys HONEST opinon

how really good am i
Personally i think im OK...alot of elevateing 2 do
alot of Battles left 2 do...Vet...No im not a vet
far from it.....I havent even been here this long

Soc...Yes my Hated rival Socrates put me up on sumtin 2 day
he told me i dont kno wha a Punch is ...but i have Potential
Propz 2 that ni99a 4 that....Told me str8 up...so ima step back
look at some of the Rv greats...try 2 get a feel 4 Punches
I kno my concepts and shit are good..Jus my Punches dont
come across 2 certain people...

But i got a grudge on my Shoulder Now....cuz im constantly Called
Overated....I promise u i wont Disappoint in the Rv Text Tourney

But jus leave some opinions on how u feel i could Improve..
wha im doin good so far...and how i can get better

The truth Hurts.........Nuff Said
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Old 12-09-04, 07:21 PM   #2
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^well you are pretty good....i think you str8.....elevating?...sure...everyone needs elevating.....you've beatin a couple of "VETS"...lol.....but i think you str8...~1~
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Old 12-09-04, 07:21 PM   #3
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you suck.............
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Old 12-09-04, 07:22 PM   #4
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lol...u cant talk 2 em like that Method..or me u fuck ...lol

but seriously can i get a breakdown on opinions

I kno im Dope..shit how do i get better and improve
on wha im doing good allready
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Old 12-09-04, 07:22 PM   #5
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Your avatar is not nice......
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Old 12-09-04, 07:24 PM   #6
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my avatar is very nice..........
touh my moniter
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Old 12-09-04, 07:24 PM   #7
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Ya gone turn my shit into a Chat instead of helpin me huh?
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Old 12-09-04, 07:24 PM   #8
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troop you coo in my oppinion..only vocab needs ajustment...
too much of it..but that just might be me..

but much respect to this thread for real..I wanan know if I'm good too..

but good thread..some GTA san andreas shit now....respect+
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Old 12-09-04, 07:27 PM   #9
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Cut down on my Vocab....point taken
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Old 12-09-04, 07:27 PM   #10
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i think your aight good vocab and shit but i also think your a fag and i called you out on 3 diffrent audio disses and still you fail to respond
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Old 12-09-04, 07:30 PM   #11
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Still i fail 2 have a Mic.......
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Old 12-09-04, 07:39 PM   #12
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Quote:
Originally Posted by *Troop*

I kno im Dope..shit


dont get cocky.. thats one way of improving
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Old 12-09-04, 07:43 PM   #13
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Stop tryna make ya verses look good, like its going on date nigga.

Realize...the font doesnt make your punches better.
And
Replace some of that vocab, and them comparisons with a some wit. Nobody wants to read a boring verse.

All I got to say for now.
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Old 12-09-04, 07:46 PM   #14
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yupp i need the same thing troop... my punches are lacking..
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Old 12-09-04, 07:47 PM   #15
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Word ..

I make my font look good b/c it makes it look more interesting to read. () Feel me ?
Anyway,yeh Troop you aiight. You elevated from when we battles (cuz you know i should of slaughtered yo ass ....

So yeh sometimes the meta and shit you use are out dated and been used and flipped before,but thats with everybody.

Your punches is sick,you got a style where u think outside the box and thats what make rappers original and unique ...

Dats about it ... keep doin ya thang.
And holla at me wheneva u wanna hit up Round: 2


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