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12-09-04, 12:03 PM | #1 | |||||
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The Last Drop Of The Sword, topical piece
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A cool damp air is reflected through holes in the clouds
the cries of death converge in the crowds and enshroud the valley has warriors strewn about in bouts of insanity war repossessed humanity as men thrive off profanity stabbing, cutting and slashing, hell takes utter control the innocence folds and men see the evil weapons hold above the battle a man stands with clinched hands like its respect he demands from his conquest of lands he manned bands of men less then him and still overcame acclaim came with his name, undefeated up until today Standing atop the mount gleaming down at bloodshed the enemy is stead, colors of red lie deep and embed powers collide as the death and conquest wed dread warriors tread through, heads severed and arms shred morning glances sunlight into his eyes as he cogitates debates tactical moves to make as ideas begin to collate he demonstrates supreme stature standing amidst chaos some lost but he is calm, as he and his enemies eyes cross he exhausts the facade of honor from his opponents heart this god of the war held up his hand and started to bark “it is on this July day that we test our undiminished might set right a province and kill our enemy, winning the fight” nobody spoke as the regal leader commanded control the moment was stole as many watched him bare his soul his finger pointed and his horses thrust forward engaged us it was our time to battle with our lives as he had our trust his lust for glory made him robust as he charged with disgust to quit or forfeit was irrelevant as he continued kicking dust finally we reach the enemy and he unsheathes his sword swinging wildly he gashed and gored through their hoard this lord gallantly galloped toward the end of the enemies line divine malign, breaking of spines refines his dominant design his blood red sword swirls majestically protecting his body embodying being godly he tears through those who are shoddy mysteriously he is seen falling down from his famous white steed mouth is wide gapping, gasping for the air he desperately needs he rises from the damp ground to face his angered adversary and contrary to belief the battle stopped and watched wary the imperial noblemen fell at the edge of his nemesis’s weapon his gold plated sword had slipped his grip and silence deafened the clank of the sword that hit the ground rang loud all around showing respect the battle halted, everyone put their heads down it was the last drop of his sword that implored an agreeing accord a circle of warriors gathered aboard and honored their brave lord the war ceased the day he deceased and the nations agreed on peace entered in history is a miraculous deed making the bleeding cease |
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12-09-04, 01:37 PM | #2 | |||||
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uppin for feedback yall
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12-10-04, 08:58 AM | #3 | |||||
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uppin for feedback yall uppin
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12-14-04, 09:39 AM | #4 | |||||
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feed back anyone
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12-16-04, 02:05 PM | #5 | |||||
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uppin for some feedback yall feedback
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