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Old 03-08-05, 10:46 PM   #1
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Question Wassup

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muthafuckas wanna talk shit ta me
but i stay fucked up off hennesey
cap a couple bitches and then u see
that the shit i do can get fuckin messy
muthafuckas spray shit as if they protest
i kill you even with a fuckin bulletproof vest
bitch i aint even close 2 the muthafuckin best
but u fake it whenever u make this request
next time u do that shit better protect ur chest
so do whatever you want fucka get dressed
cuz i'm at you're door holden an eagle .38
dont worry i'm always on time never 2 late
never wait 2 stuff your body in a crate
i'll slice ya ass till there's nuthin but strands
fuckin' cut u up with knives of diffrent brands
fuck that i'll kill ya with my own 2 bare hands

i'll fuck these muthafuckas up
slice 'em and leave 'em cut up
so bitch better shut the fuck up
u got it the same? then wassup


all these muthafuckas try ta test me
i'm a rap god, he shall not test thee
like i said before shit can get messy
i fuckin beat u and the rest B
even the dumbest could guess see
when u fuck with me i fuck with you
got your ass not even knowin what ta do
attached ta my rhymes as if i was glue
same old shit here man nuthin new
my exacution date is way overdue
if i didnt escape with the NOK crew
broke past the bars and flew
and now we goin after you


i'll fuck these muthafuckas up
slice 'em and leave 'em cut up
so bitch better shut the fuck up
u got it the same? then wassup
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Old 03-09-05, 02:33 AM   #2
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Ehh Not Ur Best But By No Means Whack I Was Stillin Feelin It....................it Was An Ight Peice Rhymes Were Good Flow Was Good Structre Was Almost Flawless(feel Free To Use This In Ya Sig)lol Some Ight Gangsta Type Shit 6/10
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Old 03-09-05, 04:17 PM   #3
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uppin feedback from everybody.......
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Old 03-09-05, 05:03 PM   #4
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this was pretty simple but i guess it is pretty good
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Old 03-09-05, 05:08 PM   #5
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yo that cool i might drop another open mic and then after that i'ma stop droppin for a couple of days and put together some ideas for a couple open mics worth so i could rest for a lil while and come up eith some original shit
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Old 03-09-05, 10:04 PM   #6
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Dis Was An Iight Peace It Flowed Wit Da Structure And Had Good Word Play............wasnt Da Best I Have Seen From U...............pz Rtf Link In Sig
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Old 03-09-05, 10:31 PM   #7
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yo thats why i'm gonna gather some ideas and stop postin for a couple days so i could kinda refresh my mind but thanx for the feed yo i appreciate it keep it comin'
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