Did this in economics, last 35 mins. of class a cpl weeks ago...gimme some feedback


whut's wrong wit our world? war's all ova da place/
Everyone is involved, no matter their age, sex, or race/
Egotistical ignoramuses lead each and every nation/
Young teens see less violence when they turn on a playstation/
Parents may blame television and big corporations/
All the while, eating away their own children's patience/
Consumers are brainwashed not by t.v., but by one another/
Many grow to be unsure if they can trust even their own mothers/
The entire world's society knows no solution ta these problems/
We gotta clean it up, jus like batman does gotham/
HE never questioned the insane decisions HE made/
What parents gotta learn is life ain't just about grades/
World peace is preached by billions, but no one tries ta make it real/
Those who are fighting wars, man, you can't imagine what they feel/
Bush tried ta bring peace ta the world but went about it in the wrong way/
If someone told ya ta bring peace by fighting, imagin whut you'd say/
For some reason this man thinks that's how it'll all go down/
All that'll be left are bodies of whom are left wit a frown/
People are forced to die fighting for a cause they think is moronic/
People bitch, but what's worse, killin someone, or smokin a little chronic/
Many say, "media corrupts us, and drugs dig an early grave"/
But it's easy for bush ta send troops, HE doesn't have ta be brave/
His life ain't in danger, though many feel it should be/
But if ya kill 'em, you're stoopin ta his level, why can't people see?!/
I know anger is hard ta supress, but ya can't kill da man/
Violence ain't da answer, c'mon people, ya got ta undastand/
Ya gotta let ya words do the harm, it can be your ammunition/
Go stand on a line, and shoot 'im down wit a petition/
Bush came ta my province capital to give us a "thank you"/
But proposed a deal, and if we refuse, he'll prolly say "i'll shank you"/
He'll stick a knife through the hearts of all the citizens/
He was friendly, so we'll ask "where has all your anger been!"/
He's got money, bombs, and an army that could leave us in ruin/
We think about this while all his hate and stupidity is abrewin/
The potential damage this man could cause in the entire world/
Is enough to extinct all the men, women, boys, and girls/
You yankees had the chance to solve the problem last month/
Now, Bush is back and will continue his world wide hunt/
His hunt for world domination will hopefully come up short/
Fuck it, maybe sumone'll pick him off, like Bush-huntin's a sport/

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