aight some lines are strectched but they go coo when i rap it to the beat....
i no its long but
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Justice is getting suffocated
This is exactly why this government must be hated

It was the first day of all the coldest seasons
The young couple lay inside the bedroom freezing
He forced his hands down her pants and she began bleeding
At this exact moment she now realize his true reasons
She wouldn’t buy his story so he began to pursue her
Until she gave up and bought into these false maneuvers
Little Johnny was overtaken buy hormones and sexual energy
He said he loved her and helped himself to her virginity
Johnny stuck it and began to rip her clit with no respect
She began to cry as she closed her eyes hoping she’ll forget this day she’ll soon regret
But He couldn’t stop it was like an addiction
But still they kept warm from the heated friction
It was amazing but she didn’t know how much more she could take
So she took the chance held her stance and began hollering rape
As the screams got louder he covered her face in a hurry
Her words became blurry and the neighbors across the hall became worried
Martha sue started fighting even more so Johnny came with full force
Accidentally fractured her skull on the head board
The worried neighbors knocked on the door
But what could Johnny now do with this dead corpse
Johnny was stunned so he ran out the fire escape
He was now a convict but he had never desired this fate

How could there be justice when every day a little girl gets raped
If there’s justice how come half these pedophiles getaway
Right now is the time for us as a people to take action
And there won’t be satisfaction
Until everyone gets puts away even if that includes Michaels Jackson
Justice is getting suffocated
This is exactly why this government must be hated

Now as a fugitive he was new to this so he constantly looked over his shoulder
Scared stiff but his soul would start shaking as the day grew colder
He was just a little soldier in this war called life
At the age of 12 Johnny started living night as day and day as night
He wasn’t the killing type so he asked for help from above
Hoping he really didn’t murder the only person he loved
The police arrive to the scene with the chalk in hand
Outline the body and say that Johnny is a wanted man
So the detectives make there way to his house
Only to find Johnny on his couch crying with a open mouth
They tell him he was the last person to see Mary sue
We know its you, so tell us what happened and everything will be coo
As he denied he replied “You can call me ray Charles because I aint saw shit”
But Just the thought of the cracked cranium made him nauseas
As the hours went on he completely lost it
Threw a rampage in his house until they took him to the police office
Out of Johnnie’s whole life he never committed an act of violence
Then he sat there as everyone stared in complete silence

How could there be justice when every day a little girl gets raped
If there’s justice how come half these pedophiles getaway
Right now is the time for us as a people to take action
And there won’t be satisfaction
Until everyone gets puts away even if that includes Michaels Jackson
Justice is getting suffocated
This is exactly why this government must be hated

They tried to get Johnny to talk but he kept everything confidential
Next they took him to the lie detector test until they drove him mental
You killed her and you know this so answer the questions and keep focused
He continued to make split decisions like Moses and finished the diagnosis
Within minutes the test scores would come back positive
They told Johnny that his perverted derogative had just broke several laws we live
But the suspect remained innocent until they pursued with further facts
So he kicked back and relaxed and lived every day like his last
Several weeks later Johnny went to court for rape and murder
Johnny spoke and said he would never hurt her and didn’t go and further
When the jury came with the verdict Mary’s family could not wait
They pronounced him not guilty and Johnny’s side began to congratulate
The jury rose once again to state since of his age he was unable to ejaculate
Because of this there was not enough DNA evidence for us to pronounce his fate
The judge picked up the wood hammer slammed it and declared him not guilty
Now Johnnie’s conscience was trapped but he was still free
What Johnny did not know was Mary had been molested as a child
Her father was born with aids and was a deranged pedophile
This is why you should never have unprotected sex
Now his first love had gave him something he’ll never forget
Johnny is left with aids and several severe STD’s
Now Mary sue soul can finally rest in peace

Justice is getting suffocated
This is exactly why this government must be hated

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nICE concept
nice verse
8.3/10

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aigth you can can vote as open mic of the month if you want...

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Nice...

but you know that you won't win open mic of the month

that villagepimp kid seems to have that on lock if he drops.

nice concept I was feeling the rhyming & the flow... nice vocab...

all around very very good.

8/10

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