Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-29-04 at 05:26 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed.. went over line limit

XxXtayve has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 05:28 AM.

check in.............................

gd luck

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Intensify Effect?..thats how u getting murcked by this oustanding VET..and I’m doing this with no REGRETS (1)

son take this Spit as a 1000 holes in ya CHEST + bloods all over ur VEST,next time think twice b4 ge’in on the NET... (2)

723 POSTS..no change..you still a JOKE,you'r lines remind me of a gay in a BLOW..you would be "booed" at if this was a SHOW (3)

you aint in no CREW..nigga get a fucking CLUE..u suck and u SCREWED.cant u find somethingelse to DO? (4)

(he aint in no crew and in his profile he didn’t put whats he does..no work …nothing)

you puches r just like and old man MOUTH...how u xpeact to hurt me when u aint even got a teeth to brag ABOUT? (5)

he dosend even know wherre the fuck he FROM...you battleing me is like putting a pole up ya tinny bum BUM..(6)

(in his profile he didn’t put where he from)

8lines and im leaving peeps asking your wherre about...y'all gatta know he's right herre in the cats mouth.. (7)


i done with BUSTING YOU..next time i bitch slap think twice 'cos i'd keep CRUSHING YOU..now lets see if this spit aint worth saying "I’M SONING YOU"? (8)


the rhymes are in caps....



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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 07:03 PM.

yo,
even if the bunner on my hip, ya nose still gonna "smell da Glock".. bro
cuz like ya sister boyfrined, when i bust in ya crib ya sis i'll be like so?
u gay herb i'll tan ya hide like leather in friction
my gat'll split u stiff into "four-kast" like a weather prediction *ha*
i'll drown ya face in-dirty-water, cuz ya nasty flow i'll leave u murked-mate
plus the only thing mentaly "ill" about u, is that u stoled rhyme from the 3ed-grade
i could read ya shit "Fifty" times, N it still wouldnt "Make-Sence"
I Quake-Menz, the closest this cat got to "underground" was freestyling in hes basement

personal
1st bar= read what it says under hes name, N where hes from..

upp'in.....

i know it was weak but i aint think i needed to try.........

uppin this mo'fucker peeps

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uupin this mo fuckert peeps upèpin

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uppppp.innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..................... .......

Voted For: intensify effect

ok... nice battle very good
IE: you had a nie verse all cool and shit nice lines nice overall you had ok strucutre nice flow ya personald were ight knd of and so were ya punchse youcould have done some rewording thoughbut nice shit some concept were playedf though

Yvoone: nice verse too ya had messedup stuructre though but ya flow was igiht ok punches and perosnals

VOte IE for a bettewr verse overall

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

please give feedback on my open mic cos its getting slept on
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147094

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

uupin this mo fucker

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Voted For: XxXtayve

Aight, Tayve Went Over The LIMIT, But I'm Glad She Did, She Dropped Some Nice Punches n Metas, Structre Was Right On Point n I Was Really Feelin The Melody, Nice Drop Taayve..

Effect, Ya Rhyme Was Aight Too..
Need Elevation In Vocab An Structure, But Some Aight Punches...

Lil Tip EFFECT, If U Battlin A Female, U Need To Use Tight Personals....

It'd Surely Get U A Win

Nice Battle..

Proppz n Keep Em Comin

Return The Favor

P E A C E

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