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Old 12-17-04, 01:32 PM   #1
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This is a Lil Somethin To help Inspire yall A Hope you like It
Time


There Is a Time to cry
there is a time to smile
A time to sigh
A time for style

A time to play
a time to work
a time to stay
a time for hurt

A time for you
a time for me
a time to move
A time to leave

Although everthing has a time
like a time to be haste
But A time of wasting minds
is a terrible time to waste.

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Old 12-17-04, 01:33 PM   #2
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Im Uppin for suggestions or feedback or even if you wanna hate on me im uppin for that to but like I said there is a time for everything and if you a hata its a time for me to kick yo ass LOL
Uppin for feed or suggestions
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Old 12-20-04, 11:06 AM   #3
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chea man...it was tight...it had meaning so keep it up...and i dont think no one can hate you for that...if anyone hates someone in here because he or she dont like someones poetry, then that is pussie...thats peoples feelings...nah mean...8/10...keep them comming
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Old 12-20-04, 11:17 AM   #4
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a time to give praise.........

.........is now. Well done bro, im feeling that big time. Seems like it came from the heart and was well thought-of..

..keep it up
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Old 12-20-04, 12:57 PM   #5
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Thanx Mayne Yalll Make Me wanna Write Another one LOL but thanx for the feedback ........Do U Have N e suggestions?
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Old 12-20-04, 07:45 PM   #6
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yeah mayne dat was deep. u put ya soul in dat 1 dawg. keep doin wut u do and stay up.
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Old 12-20-04, 11:51 PM   #7
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Cmon ppl Give me some feed bcuz itll be a while b4 i post another one
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Old 12-21-04, 01:51 PM   #8
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yeah man liked how u flipped this the first tim ei saw this peom was n the bible i forgot qhat scripture but it had the same format keep doing ya thing though!
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Old 12-25-04, 08:26 PM   #9
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Real nice...Feeling almost everything u been puttin out lately man...I agree with this...Shit was good...Only thing is, I would've liked to see this a little longer...It sux when youre reading something this beautiful and it just ends...lol...but anyways, nice drop fam...1
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