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Check in by: 02-03-05 at 04:28 PM

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Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 09:49 PM.

When Thiss Fag Iss Mad,Lets His Penis Attack His Dads..
Not Tough Juss Aktin Bad,Made His Pussy Bleed Uses His Keyboard As A Maxi Pad..
Even On Rv Kid Has A Lightstak,Why He Think He Got Tyte Raps?
Bites Sacks,So On Aim He Likes Ta Wrigtmak..
Blaze Thiss Chump,With Kays Or Pumps..
Gets Nutted On,So Tha Spots On His Face Aren't Razor Bumps..
17-4?Kid Trash Really Who's Teachin Him?
Hand Blew Off Now Mad Cus His Sex Buddies Leavin Him..
All Tha Spits Onli Thing Tyte 4rm Him Wass His Smedium..
Even Tho He 4rm Hell Nigga Still Aint Spittin Fire..
Fags Rage,No Harm So Hows He Black Plague Kids A Liar
Still A Virgin And Onli Screwin He's Doin Iss Fixin Tires....
** Explanations**
Light Stack-Low Money
Wrightmak-Aim Name
Lol Bumps On Hiss Face
17-4 Rekord
Had A Smedium Shirt On In Hiss Pic
His Location Say Hell

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The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 07:23 PM.

Only time ya “wraps on fire” is when you lightin up joints in ya zig zags
I’m commitin hate crimes the way I killed marv, now I’m murderin this fag
Ya’ll some homo’s together, ya ass like marv’s submarine.. Full of his “seamen”
And Marvjay’s Dick like a colonoscopy, its all up in ya ass for a reason
Only time you “spit hard” is when you imitatin ya avvy daffy duck
Other than that, you nothing but a washed up-has been ass fuck
Ya homo-ass nothing to me, not important like middle school graduation
This battle goin into history, the day Plague ripped Kordas ass like flatulation
Talentwise you obsolete, you just “wack” like pee wee herman at that movie
Heard ya rhymes and thought of suicide, so do that sticom and “Just shoot me”
Your verse is worthless… lines are full of trash like alleyways behind a store
Ya shit’s stagnant like swamps, prehistorically old like extinct dinasours
But this ain’t Jurassic park kid, nobody wants that shit, cant you see?
Shit was wack when jesus won a freestyle with it, back in 20 A. D.

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Voted For: The Black Plague

gotta give it to the black plague on dis one....he came harder imo...i like the wordplay and vocab...dis was a nice bar...
"Ya’ll some homo’s together, ya ass like marv’s submarine.. Full of his “seamen”
And Marvjay’s Dick like a colonoscopy, its all up in ya ass for a reason"
kordozar had a good verse also but u tried all these personals but they werent really backed by punches u know what i mean...its like they didnt all flow together
with that my vote goes to
The Black Plague
RTF..
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uppin again this again

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checkin polls.....good battle...........................

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Voted For: The Black Plague

Kordozars Verse
When Thiss Fag Iss Mad,Lets His Penis Attack His Dads..
Not Tough Juss Aktin Bad,Made His Pussy Bleed Uses His Keyboard As A Maxi Pad..
eh weak and didnt flow good...
Even On Rv Kid Has A Lightstak,Why He Think He Got Tyte Raps?
Bites Sacks,So On Aim He Likes Ta Wrigtmak..
thats his screename but it doesnt go together with anything else that you said in the line...it doesnt make sense
Blaze Thiss Chump,With Kays Or Pumps..
Gets Nutted On,So Tha Spots On His Face Aren't Razor Bumps..
lol ok
17-4?Kid Trash Really Who's Teachin Him?
Hand Blew Off Now Mad Cus His Sex Buddies Leavin Him..
ok
All Tha Spits Onli Thing Tyte 4rm Him Wass His Smedium..
Even Tho He 4rm Hell Nigga Still Aint Spittin Fire..
wtf?...didnt rhyme and i have no clue what you even were trying to say cuz everything was mistyped or the e-net thug typing thing idk...
Fags Rage,No Harm So Hows He Black Plague Kids A Liar
Still A Virgin And Onli Screwin He's Doin Iss Fixin Tires....
pretty good closer...

Black Plagues Verse
Only time ya “wraps on fire” is when you lightin up joints in ya zig zags
I’m commitin hate crimes the way I killed marv, now I’m murderin this fag
eh...
Ya’ll some homo’s together, ya ass like marv’s submarine.. Full of his “seamen”
And Marvjay’s Dick like a colonoscopy, its all up in ya ass for a reason
lol ok
Only time you “spit hard” is when you imitatin ya avvy daffy duck
Other than that, you nothing but a washed up-has been ass fuck
wasnt complex and could of been worded better but ok personal
Ya homo-ass nothing to me, not important like middle school graduation
This battle goin into history, the day Plague ripped Kordas ass like flatulation
lmao...ok
Talentwise you obsolete, you just “wack” like pee wee herman at that movie
Heard ya rhymes and thought of suicide, so do that sticom and “Just shoot me”
nah wasnt feelin it...
Your verse is worthless… lines are full of trash like alleyways behind a store
Ya shit’s stagnant like swamps, prehistorically old like extinct dinasours
good rhyming and wording...ok punch
But this ain’t Jurassic park kid, nobody wants that shit, cant you see?
Shit was wack when jesus won a freestyle with it, back in 20 A. D.
lol best line of verse it was pretty good

overall i thought black plague had a little bit of the edge here in punches and vocab...kordozar you had some good shit but i just thought blacks was a little harder but i think both were kinda weak...no hate though good luck to both

peace

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Voted For: The Black Plague

open:Black
mid:black
clos:black
win:black

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U WANT TO BE LIKE ME BUT U CANT! IM A RENEGADE I DO IT MY WAY

Uppin again thanks for the votes ya'll

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Uppin once again

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