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12-29-04, 04:15 PM
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Do Re Mi
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step into my m i n d . . .
IP: 0825 899A
its sad, cuz i honestly dont give a fuck anymore .. lifes just secondary
to my primary war .. people want me dead im right here let em do it .. let em bleed me dry drip my blood till i contain no fluid .. i do not fear death for i was born to die .. i was born heartless with no tears to cry .. all i know is pain all i see is violence .. all i feel is flesh and bone, all i hear is silence .. i need to be reborn thru this song i shall accomplish .. the lord is the Judge and the devils my acomplis .. its like im all alone in tha world and no-ones got my back .. i step outside the world fades to black .. im suddenly surrounded by the shadow of hate .. i geuss its true god can destroy what he claims to create .. i wish that my world would change for the better so i could have a happy ending .. dont mis-interpret or mis-understand the message i am sending .. feels like the four corners of my round world close in movin fast .. im the first to share these thoughts trust i wont be the last .. my crew is the only family i got when i run tha streets .. my tough exterior hides the inner boy who constantly wheeps .. got eyes in the back of my head im consumed by paranoya .. please leave me alone i swear i got nothing for ya .. push my buttons flip the switch see what happens to you .. you will wind up dead or impared yes its true .. im the one who walks alone in the darkness that is my surrounding .. the voices speakin in my mind a constant pounding .. weed got me crazy buggin and such whats the remedy .. im pretty sure you were my boy but now your no friend to me .. my microphone is the cure for my sickness its terminal wont go away .. plant my feet strong as i spit the first line im here to stay .. line up ya greatest forces nature and man armies of the world combined .. the chaos of my life will overshadow the war so dark you will not find .. destruction is the path i walk on the trail to wickedness .. some say im mentally in need therapy deprived but some say im sick with this
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12-29-04, 07:58 PM
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Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 07D4 5143
str8 poem but keep elevating on ur writing and you will get it but on the other hand str8.
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12-31-04, 10:38 AM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: 3C42 2871
thanks for the Feedback ... keep em comin people
show some love ..
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