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Old 01-01-05, 08:43 PM   #1
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Clearing The Bush

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This is a AIM collab I did with Twixn from RB about Bush, 9/11, etc...

I'm in bold
He's in itallics

one conception born from a coded mislead desception
A country torn apart and then lead in the wrong direction
a section with troubled thoughts led to the demise, errors and twist left a mess
the press left no bless with the propoganda that came to infest
the supressed people could not transgress... left in a shatterd state
without debat they where taken shaken and left in rubbles, a terrible fate
sedate with drugs leave em destroyed and molested caressed with needles
filled with hate wanna strike but just left feeling feeble
left shaken ash in the air... children gone with the wind this is a sin
Families crying, government lying and you wanna rebulid again?
filled with compasion? then dont destroy a nation then oferr them a simple ration
Soldiers dying in Iraq and all you talk about's affirmative action
dosent matter the faction this shit is wrong... dont you realize bush
We dont have to do this shit, but you act like we're pushed
trained the terrorist to pull up your economy sent them for oil tuned to the enemy
You call it an axis of evil, but we simply find it offending see
why would you run into something just to see it ending in decree
Using up the taxpayers money on something we dont need
just becuase you spend everything on youself dosent mean you need more feed
Goin after a "rightous cause" thats quite easily seen as greed
plant the seed of anger... pu this innocent world in danger
Treating your own brethren as nothing more than a stranger
a stagle hold on society adding to all the manic anxetiy
Quickening the heartbeat of the world, yet nothing to make you stop it seems
so ill stop and pretend that this nightmare was really just a dream..
Cuz Bush we all know you're no longer on America's team

Structure might be off a bit but it was off the top

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Old 01-01-05, 08:52 PM   #2
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i'm down with every word i felt it and it's too damn bad bush got relected but your rap was the shit, if u got the chance leave some feedback on mine it's an eminem type of rap out of anger called "no feedback is a muthafucka" and tell me what u think i should improve on and what i should keep on doing.
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Old 01-02-05, 12:10 AM   #3
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that was tight i liked it from beginning to end very good job 10/10

FUCK BUSH

check out my open mic its in the sig also anti-bush
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