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Check in by: 12-15-04 at 08:28 PM

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1mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 08:02 PM.

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yur 1/2 the man i am so pleez don't get me started....
with how fast you accepted this battle you must be 1/2 retarded...
yur names suites you, cause i'm gonna burn yah ass...
the game boots you out cuz, infurno will not last...
you can't out last me i'll rip you worse than yah ass iz....
you get fuked so much people would think you handin out passes...
get some glasses, look closer, this iz 1MIC you can't out last this....
i'll school you in hip hop, i'm loyal to the game...
don't fuk with the illest, i'll leave yah like yah name...
if you don't know what that means, i'll tell yah, "Up in Flamez"

Infurno has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-04 08:02 PM.

yo

challengin me for fun-mic? that tells me u da dumb-type/
for easy wins im like "NAS" cause "all i need is 1MIC"/

u know ur my son right? goin against me u must not love-life/
and before this battle started we all knew that i 1mic(won mic)/

cause we battled before, and i think yall know who the winner-was/
cause all he does is 'drop trash' and im known for smashin 'liter-bugs'/

he try to be hard but packs 'sweet bars' like 'trick-or-treat-bags'/
stop smokin u? not even if i was on a nic-a-tine-patch/

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Voted For: Infurno

Vote: infurno

openr: inf
ender: inf - killed it
vocab: mic
lyrics: mic
wordplay: inf
personals:tied
punches: inf
flow: tied
structure: mic

inf - 7/10
1mic - 6/10

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Voted For: Infurno

infurno took this one pretty easily......

infurno
1sr bar......nice play off of his name...worded good
2nd bar......another good play off of his name
3rd bar......lol nice lil punch
4th bar......decent punch...prolly worst bar of your verse

nice verse.....nice multis...punches hit pretty good and you played off of his name good....

1 mic
1st bar.....hmm ok personal ...could have been worded a lil bit better....good concept though
2nd bar...not a very good bar.....u tried to play off of his name...could have been better
3rd bar....not a good bar...gay jokes are played
4th bar....structure was not good on this...you couldnt even tell where the lines rhymed at...not good
5th bar....decent...could have been worded better...

overall....learn how to use multis better...get some wordplay and creat better punches that will hit harder....no hate....just trying to help you elevate.....


i voted for infurno because his punches hit harder and he used better multis and played off of his name good


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Voted For: Infurno

damn dog dat was hard yo lines up in
flames,1mic, i felt as if you was reapeatin

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Voted For: 1mic

weak..verse

open: inferno
close: 1mic
personals:none
metas: none
punches: 1mic
multis: none

win: 1mic

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Voted For: Infurno

infurnow was more creative and had better rhytme scheme
his pounches were also better same with his personals the (won mic ) line was good............

1mic rhyme scheme was bad played lines it was bnlahhhhhhhhhhhh

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Voted For: 1mic

1mic

yur 1/2 the man i am so pleez don't get me started....
with how fast you accepted this battle you must be 1/2 retarded...
^ Meh...opener weak punch 1st line self-glory

yur names suites you, cause i'm gonna burn yah ass...
the game boots you out cuz, infurno will not last...
^ aight punch good flip off the name

you can't out last me i'll rip you worse than yah ass iz....
you get fuked so much people would think you handin out passes...
^ lol this was good actually

get some glasses, look closer, this iz 1MIC you can't out last this....
^ BLAH ruined it with self-glory never do 3 line rhymes like that

i'll school you in hip hop, i'm loyal to the game...
don't fuk with the illest, i'll leave yah like yah name...
if you don't know what that means, i'll tell yah, "Up in Flamez"
^ Meh closer

Overall
1 or 2 good punches but you still need to elevate lose the self-glory it don't help work on the complexity of your rhymes and also try and add some consistancy but other than that...it was average

Infurno

challengin me for fun-mic? that tells me u da dumb-type/
for easy wins im like "NAS" cause "all i need is 1MIC"/
^ Meh opener flipped the name but self-g though

u know ur my son right? goin against me u must not love-life/
and before this battle started we all knew that i 1mic(won mic)/
^ Meh u already used 1 mic as a rhyme why again?

cause we battled before, and i think yall know who the winner-was/
cause all he does is 'drop trash' and im known for smashin 'liter-bugs'/
^ good punch was better than the last 2

he try to be hard but packs 'sweet bars' like 'trick-or-treat-bags'/
stop smokin u? not even if i was on a nic-a-tine-patch/
^ Lol good closer ya picked up

Overall
Again similar situation not consistant although flow was good structure better 1 or 2 good punches you flipped the name a couple of times but i'm best jus copying his overall coz it was the same really...also lose the / it's mad newbish you don't need it...

V/1mic...to be honest he came jus a lil more harder the 1/2 man bit was slightly self-g but i jus realised infurnos sub-title and he actually flipped off that...ima give it to him for slightly more consistancy but other than that it was pretty much a tie...both need elevation

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