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Old 01-05-05, 03:41 AM   #1
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Question i be bored....posted drUnk need input

IP: FDD6 AE15

Just a newbie emcee never been spotted on the scene
just a poor boy not livin as a nike sponsored wannabee
Sucking back on bongs like ur ho does your homies dongs
little slut sucks so hard helps makes your dick grow long
prepare yourself for when you enter my battle zone
better leave the gat at home, for lyrics will be the only thing thrown
spit hate not with chrome but from what inspired inside my dome
see if you can resist my latest mission of written composition
everlasting, the fittist, the next best thing to nuclear fission
this is my home base defend it with weapons diabolical
torture you ill rake you over metaphorical coals
my style is old, call it aboriginal, shred it as a vaginal wall
as i bust you and your bitches cherry, i heard she said you were a fairy
you've been substituted, outta the game, put on the bench
youre coreness has been doubted, gone unoticed in silence
i speak of you in shame, and it seems in vain
that they let you go on all the same, a man insane




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Old 01-05-05, 11:27 AM   #2
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well iaint got many posts fer im a noob...

cant criticize if people dont tell you shit bout ur own

input???
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Old 01-05-05, 11:55 AM   #3
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Dat wuz dopppee yo...i wish i cud rime lyke u.
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Old 01-05-05, 11:56 AM   #4
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Dat wuz dopppee yo...i wish i cud rime lyke u.

NOT....
Just elevate alot, and work on your structure not inviting and hard to read.
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Old 01-05-05, 12:07 PM   #5
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cheers bro
i need to figure out where to start

ifrastructure is needed to help inspire
listen to the instructor, help build an empire
everyones advising me to elevate
when what i create is a solid as slate
listen to what you say, its littered with hate
for you to impregnate a rhyme with my weight
you'd have to copy and paste, artificially inseminate






text is unforgiving
i can hook this in audio
wordplay
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