Os1riS
Got the stuff in the trunk ready for action, left my girl at home relaxin
Thoughts run wild got the gun i was stashin, few minutes going to cause a chain reaction
Tryin to steer the car, sweat down my forehead, everythings a blur
We ready to jack the place for sure, the pressure's on, this is my allure
Vision through my black mask, the spot in pinpoint reach, for me to drop
Got the getaway set for the cops, Mic givin me the signs like corn crops
Got out the car a block away, went down the back alley, so no one seen me
Reach for my nextel to phone Mic, to see if hes in his spot he........


.MictoriouS.
Pull my Mask Down - Glance 'Round, I See the Clerk in the Glass Now..|
We Run up in the Door Strutting - Pull out the Pistols quick 'for the time she can reach the police button..|
Aiight Bitch! If yo wish this shit to Pass Regular, Hand over the Fucking Keys and Open up the Cash Register..|
Dont fucking Move bitch! I know you got something at Home For...So Follow our directions and Rip out that Phone Cord..|
Open the Fuckin Bag Bitch..Now Throw the Money in this - And I aint stupid, Hand me that Secret stash Up under the Desk!..|
Aiight we got the Paper Os1ris, Get ready to Bust it out...But First Take ya Gun handle and knock this Motherfucker Out!..|


Os1riS
I look around customers eyen me for a description, so i flip there attention
Shot up was my selection, Tell em to all get into the room with these set of directions,
Move or yell ill have to shot you all, cell phones give em to me aint callin your kids at the mall
One guy tries to run shoot em in the leg, blood spatters, the man trembles then falls
Turn around see a commotion comin from outside, looks like the cops
My heart stops, but emotions ride, got with Mic in the safe took the money inside
The C-4 must be what got outside attention, scared but the sight of money relieved my tension
Now for are escape how we goin to do this, looked to Mic to see if he thought we blew it....


.MictoriouS.
Ok Wait, Wipe ya Fingerprints so we dont leave a Trail to Take - n' go around the store and rip out every single Surveillance Tape!!..|
... Two Of America's Most Wanted; Hated Debated But Neva Castrated; Glance In My Rearview; Damn Os We Still Got Our Licenses Plated....|
... Hit The Switch So the License Be Gone; Like Need For Speed I Step On The Gas; Now This High Speed Chase Is Own.....|
... The Pitch Of Darkness; Protect Us Sharks Bitch; As I Turn The Corner More Cops Our On Us; A Ink! This Reminds Me Of RV Cuz Everybody Trynna Roll Behind Us.....|
..... O'Shit Osiris Im Losing Control; And Luck Must Be Running Out Cus Were Nearing The End Of Our Road.........Im Serious Ink This Could Be All She Wrote As The Car Steers Closer To The Watery Road; Osiris Watch Out......!!


You Thought We Was Leaving Sikee...

....Finally They'll See Theres No Stop'en Thee; Cus Osiris n Me Stay Robbin Free; And Will Foreva Be Remember Like 2pac And Biggie....|

Wow...Nothing short of what I expected...Great topic, and great imagery...I could see it all happening in my head as I continued to read...Shit was on another level yall...Both of yall came thru and delivered that ghetto gutter gangsta shit...Im really feeling this...This really needs to be an audio...weerd...Uppin this for my boys os1ris and .Mictorious.

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good shit...liked the way the story was tolded...both of yall did ya thing...1

it was all really good except the end wasn't as good for structure and the "..." parts
made it a little hard to follow but besides that ur shit was off the hook

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good drop, nice flow from both,good rhyme's. story line is dope.

Two Of America's Most Wanted; Hated Debated But Neva Castrated; Glance In My Rearview; Damn Ink We Still Got Our Licenses Plated....|
^^^dope line's right there.
keep dropping.

alright good drop peep'z nice flow going. nice topic. Dope lines. keep on dropping

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yo that was tight, for real the story line was like a lyrical Book lol .. hit us up witta sequel for sure .. peace.love

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I'm feelin tha hell out tha drop.........keep writtin wet ass shit like dat an something good will happpen

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