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12-26-04, 02:26 PM
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Murda Money
IP: 926A 1562
~Warned you it wasnt smart... dont even start~ ~Knife in the heart... guns blasting all around~ ~You wanted beef and got it... now you underground~ ~Cant hear a sound... body just found~ ~Stepped up and got struck down... strangled to death~ ~Losing your breath... blood splatters all on my shirt~ ~Under the dirt... theres a secret no1 needs to know~ ~What a sad way to go... your family surrounded by sorrow~ ~You amounted to shit... worth less than my spit~ ~Murders on my mind like money... u think its crazy n i think its funny~ ~Blood stained clothes... three dead hoes~ ~Three bullet holes... holdin it down for my bros~ ~Murder in the hood aint nothing new to me~ ~Say the wrong thing n ill get u killed like 1,2,3~ ~Never thought of the consequence... guilt on your conscience~ ~Drowned your own kin... this ones not a petty sin~ ~He died with a grin... why should you feel remorse~ ~Try to not think about it and hide the corpse~ ~At least you didnt stab him... you did what was needed~ ~Cutting yourself while your calling 9-1-1~ ~Saying someone just stormed your house wit a gun~ ~Put it to your head and told you to go to bed~ ~His shirt was covered in red... you could hear screams~ ~You just closed your eyes in hope of sweet dreams~ ~Blood stained clothes... three dead hoes~ ~Three bullet holes... holdin it down for my bros~ ~Murder in the hood aint nothing new to me~ ~Say the wrong thing n ill get u killed like 1,2,3~ ~Gasping for air and spitting up blood~ ~Your lying face down dying in the mud~ ~Your throats sliced open... your necks all broken~ ~Last words spoken... HELP ME IN CHOKING!~ ~Wounds covered in salt... its a burning sensation~ ~Dont play the hero... you cant save the nation~ ~Heart starts racing... your greatest fear your facing~ ~You can already see the light... deaths in your sight~ ~Trembling in fright... no chance of making it~ ~Got your life in my hands... guess what, now im taking it~ |
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12-26-04, 05:51 PM
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IP: AACA 04C0
yo man that was good ure flow was sickl rhyming could have been a lil more advanced but it was still tight,a lil grusome topic but still very good ure words put the vissual in my mind good work...
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12-26-04, 10:28 PM
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Simply Dope
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IP: 926A 1562
Thanx for the feed... upping
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12-27-04, 02:57 AM
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Simply Dope
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IP: 926A 1562
Uppin... i see shit still gets slept on in open mic...
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12-27-04, 05:04 PM
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IP: 926A 1562
damn... can i some feed?
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12-27-04, 05:08 PM
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.:Comin In With A Bang:.
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IP: 28AD 5545
yeah da flow was tite like sum virgin pussy...da vocab was pretty good..like how ya structure was...Str8 hood fam...keep it up dat was sum hardcore shit..Datz da kind of song thats getz da club ready for my song I GOT THAT lol..speakin of I GOT THAT return da favor and leave feedback
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12-28-04, 02:06 PM
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Simply Dope
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IP: 926A 1562
thanx for the feed... ill return the favor
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12-30-04, 10:43 AM
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Simply Dope
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IP: 926A 1562
upping this shit...
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12-30-04, 05:00 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: B91D DBBD
yo this is good, had an original flow to it cause of the rhyme scheme you used.
good drop. |
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01-05-05, 09:52 PM
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Simply Dope
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IP: 926A 1562
thanx upping...
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01-06-05, 11:09 AM
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Simply Dope
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IP: 926A 1562
uppping again...
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01-08-05, 11:47 AM
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Simply Dope
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IP: 926A 1562
Elevators going up...
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01-08-05, 11:52 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: BEFF D5AF
yeah that piece was good...i liked the structure and the topic was nice...it flowed good...and thats all...keep it up!!
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01-08-05, 11:58 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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IP: 0825 899A
U Know wuz up.............love tha topic an how u standed on it.......................great wordplay an I love tha verbal usage.............Keep doin yo thing
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