aight my vocals are a lil hard to here...wwll atleast they are to me on my cpu speakers.........but it is a song...well just listen




leaev some feedback..this is hella deeeeeppp

http://www.soundclick.com/djemsce

uppin for some feedback.........................................

upin for some type of feedback...................................

so i know you guys are listening to it but aint no body leaving feed back.............

listening:
beatope
flow:good
lyrics:dope
Quality:good
Voice:try putting more intonation,but i like ur voice

return the favor,the name of my song is Crazy In Love Remix

flow wasnt too bad i didnt really liek it though
nice lyrics
nto feelin the hook

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i know that wasnt how the hook was going to be.....my girl or my frined was going to rap it.........but my girl dont want to try and rap and my friend is hella dumb so i just did it......

return the favor now

i am i just had to get off the internet becuz i got dial up and when ever some calls i have to get off

Man, u got somethin dope goin for you, but you aint tappin into it, stop holding back- unleash the beast, I think if this track had more emotion it would be a really nice peice. Your rhyming about real shit, emotional shit, but you're not matching the lyrics with your intensity... work on that and pronounciation and your golden... we will get up and do this collab... just gimme some time. 1

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