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Check in by: 01-03-05 at 01:49 PM

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Armada Da 187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-02-05 01:50 PM.

Damian has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-02-05 01:52 PM.

You cant spit a dis?/ "Diss" nigga a joke/
Seems like the bes thing you eva f*ckin do is choke!
C'mon Damian/Nigga be real, me n you is sumtin like a polar bear & seal/ Ima tell you dis dawg "Loose the Rust" u neva gonna recover once "Armada smacks you up"/ 2-2 record? goin be 2-3/ Ima Make u Regret the day u eva battled me/
Dont worry damian dis battles barely begun/ the only nine u eva packed is a "5 n 4 ones!"/ mess wit Armada you goin get hurt/ Ill treat ya like a ostrich, n shove ya head in the dirt/
W/E man dis rhymes sick, word of advice, rap sumbody who wont spit back prick!!!
I made dis battle, results are set, prolly washin dishes so you can finally get ya fingers wet!/ Ya gotta crawl before you walk ,get money fo the gat, hittin u wit mad rhymes makin ya head go splat/ You rnt ready for me fool I jus "stund Ya"/ cock it back blow ya brains all over canada. im laughin as I type , ya poor lil chump, u beatin me? ok and the Toronto Maple LEafs are gonna win the Stanley Cup!!

-PA MILITIANT-

I'll merk you bad like Rosie O'donnel trying to get her baby back
Putting yourself down without even trying,claming that your wack
Im like Donal Trumph's assistant,i have an important mission
I have to make sure to not miss it,destroy Armada Da 187
I bet you had your dick grabed by gays,bodysurfing at a rap concert
de day later asked his father to go back again,he told him to ask his mother
He ran up and ask and begged the slut telling that he would fuck her
You intelligent is exagerated like affonting a two head monster
Hes like a fucking disease lets cover him of a huge plaster
No mather the weather,let him sleep outside while its winter
Rainy or not i dont give i fuck i wish one day youd get hit by thunder

whats the meaning of toronto goona win the cup? andim from quebec lmao anyway uppin

Voted For: Damian

One sided.

open: Damian:"I'll merk you bad like Rosie O'donnel trying to get her baby back
Putting yourself down without even trying,claming that your wack" -Much better. Use of the meta and a harder hitting punch

close: I honestly didnt like any of those closes at all. Honestly Damian you could av done better than that. If the end rhyme was better tho it would have been damian.

Armada's best bar: "Of wat i could make out of that verse this was the best: "Dont worry damian dis battles barely begun/ the only nine u eva packed is a "5 n 4 ones!"/" -This was not good at all but the best in his verse. Honestly bro i dont mean to hate so much but you should just leave now and never look back.

Damian's best bar: "de day later asked his father to go back again,he told him to ask his mother
He ran up and ask and begged the slut telling that he would fuck her" - Was the best done i think. Your only problem was the lack of rhyming Damian. Not that it was a bad verse but i just feel it more wen it rhymes more.

Armada
Overall Armada's verse was really not appealling to me. I thought the flow and structure had gone completely out the window and he just thought fuck it il write til i stop. -Dont fly bro. apologies..

Damian
Damian your verse was good, good punches and quite entertaining but just try and get the rhymes flowing more.

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uppin this,its my last battle on RV................

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Fuckin Uppin This Bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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the whole toronto thing wasnt sayin u was from toronto it was jus dissin canadian hockey cuz las tyme i checked quebec didnt have a hockey team if they do n i new about it i would have put them instead of toronto

Voted For: Damian

*sighs* damien, you shouldn't be battling people like this, myself and yourself both know it's wrong LoL.

You get my vote, for the better structure, flow punches and personals.

*sighs dramatically one last time*

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...t=166678&page=1

please hit that up with an honest vote.

Armada, It would be good if you worked your structure out, if you see how damian has it, try and make it like that.

That was probably your biggest downfall.

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