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Check in by: 12-20-04 at 11:34 PM

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Jim Crow has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 11:07 PM.

ol'dirtymexican has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 11:08 PM.

im tha wrong one ta fool wit
i pull a toof quick,click
sprinkle u wit chalk like pool sticks
yous a bitch, ya even speak wrong
n ill have ya whole crew doin rest in peace songs
keep tlkin n wind up in tha trunk
i'll have ya bleedin like its dat time a tha month
period
im serious i hand out ounces
n b runnin thru abandoned houses
duck tha cops
then come bac out ta serve tha blocks
when we spit we both thugs about it
tha difference iz i live it u rap about it
its a real game
especially when tha feds kno ya face n ya real name
got lock away but i still sling record wise
n i lift tha pounds n i dont mean excercise
i git dude upset when i spits muh rhymes
ya wanna battle well lets put sum bets on tha line
im lovin dis business n imma git figas cuz
i wuz in tha basement way b4 tigga wuz
n i wuz big pimpin way b4 jigga wuz
if u dudes thugs then im a monsta
ya bitch chose me cuz muh cock iz longa
n i'll still melt ya face like hot lazagna


^^tha pool stick part iz tlk bout a police outline tha rest u should kno

Ya Mind Sleeps-From-Mental-Confusion While Your Eyes Weeps-From-Lyrical-Abusing..
And My Voters Leaping From Cliffs Cause The Already "Jumped To A Conclusion"!!

His Limbs Tossed And Heart Lost, You Really Dont Know What The Cost-Is..
After This Battle, Running 'Behind Buses' The Only Way Im "Exhausted"!!!

Lyrics Are Supperior In A Written Manor Thats Disectin'-Ya-Nuts, So Dont Duck..
Vest-Not-Protectin'-Ya Cuase Like 'Ironing Pants' You "Pressing-Your-Luck"!!!

Merk With More-Worthy-War Metaphors,I'm "Spiritually-Deep" Church-Whores...
My "Arm-Forces" Through Chest, Be All You Can Be But I'll "b-more"

Noy A Damn Vote Yet.Pitiful.All These Members Viewing This Daily.

Voted For: Jim Crow

Jimmy's structure was better and had better flow....Vocab was a not very good...same with punches...elavate sum more

ODM structure sucks like hoes on my dick....Flow was bad...had a some good punches but also weak...no good vocab both ways...elavate alot

v/Jim Crow

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Itz Coopa Bang bitch and I done made a transition,
I smell what ya hattaz cookin but ya aint smellin what im wrippin,
The net fixin to burn cuz Bang in the buildin....




Me fallin off,start Trippin and slackin,
Nope that will never happen Just like the Pope Rappin......

Voted For: Jim Crow

i give it to my nigga jimmy crow, he crazy stuture and his words connected more

odl u had a hot verse too but jims was over all better

vote: jim crow

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We PoP dem sours and drag them faggots


Get soul clapped .....e-style

Voted For: Jim Crow

breakdown
handsdown
open/close...Jim
multies..jim
punches..jim
flow..jim
structure..jim
wordplay..jim
enjoyed..jim
handsdown overall vote..Jim Crow..
e.z...Yo ol' you gotta elevate on ya wordplay and punchlines.thats what lost you this battle wun..

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Voted For: Jim Crow

I take jim on this one he had better strucutre more personels better multis vocab was better and he flowed better I think and better rhymign no hate but keep elevating iight.


JIM
Ya Mind Sleeps-From-Mental-Confusion While Your Eyes Weeps-From-Lyrical-Abusing..
And My Voters Leaping From Cliffs Cause The Already "Jumped To A Conclusion"!!

His Limbs Tossed And Heart Lost, You Really Dont Know What The Cost-Is..
After This Battle, Running 'Behind Buses' The Only Way Im "Exhausted"!!!

Lyrics Are Supperior In A Written Manor Thats Disectin'-Ya-Nuts, So Dont Duck..
Vest-Not-Protectin'-Ya Cuase Like 'Ironing Pants' You "Pressing-Your-Luck"!!!
10/10

ol
im tha wrong one ta fool wit
i pull a toof quick,click
sprinkle u wit chalk like pool sticks
yous a bitch, ya even speak wrong
n ill have ya whole crew doin rest in peace songs
keep tlkin n wind up in tha trunk
i'll have ya bleedin like its dat time a tha month
period
im serious i hand out ounces
n b runnin thru abandoned houses
8.9/10

hit up on my links peace

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Voted For: Jim Crow

for not being wack and for not being a dirty mexican

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Voted For: ol'dirtymexican

last eight bars was bit off of best of caissidy freestyle yall some biting ass motherfuckas on this site

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Where Im From! Cabrini Green!

i cant belive u ol mexica n ur a fuckin biter man .........................

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