THE MOST VICIOUS METAPHORS ON THE INTERNET YALL CAN’T DO IT

My flames legit and rotten but like a plain knit cotton// shirt you
Can wear on the block everywhere like ROCCAWEAR// true
This rabbit fabric is hot, fun to blast it wearing none elastic
Shoes// and melting plastic crews// like candle wax, this stuff drastic
I’m bazaar and ill in here like a bar filled with beer//
Get cats drunk of this funk my stats sunk// ships sincere
In the Atlantic Ocean with romantic potions// am I clear?
This stuff gets cats high like bald mountains and wet like
Tall fountain// leaking h/2/0 that mean water I get hype
Lyrics in my mind along with spirits fine and divine// only
Like a balcony I’m an elevated platform educated strongly
With stats that swarm// like bees over honey try sting eyes
With bling vibes cats sees money around my neck stuff cling to guys
Like dew rags dodge desires like large fires a man can want
Too much and do a true search and come up empty can’t flaunt
Failure or other paraphernalia

u was WARN ABOUT NOT DROPING LINKS....
N NOW U ARE FREE-POSTIN FRESTYLES ON OTHER PEOPLE WORK...

DONT CONTINUE TO DO THAT OR U WILL BE BANND U HAVE BEEN WARN N IS NOW ON THE LIST:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

Upping For A Response

when you use the word 'like' it makes it a simile you idiot

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Wasnt bad man. But that title dont suit it properly:



Bro, we can do it but it was good. Full of metaphors obviously that were coming thick and fast and quite clever. Jpoll is right about the similies tho.

Structure was off tho i thought. Overall 6.5/10

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all right got some responses for real up in here thanks

i dont think it was great, your structure looked like you e-fucked it up the ass.
just work on that, but iunno maybe its your style that makes me dislike it.